A little bit unrealistic here. War doesn’t come so quickly like a snap of a finger and it’s mostly for economic benefits. They haven’t even overtaken the monarchy and they want to wage war with only a few weeks of time to consolidate their power?

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Hey when will you continue this story

There goes my interest, another fate fic where their grail system are draggen into another franchise.

Shirou's a bit of an idiot, isn't he? Showing a bit of his abilities would be enough to lessen the hurt Louise is feeling and he knew that since he's already figured out what's going on in her situation.

ok fucking beta bitch fuck this fic

The fact he doesn't have any useful items in his Vault pisses me off... he has infinite space, and you want to tell me there would be a person in existence such as him, one that doesn't have at least ten of every single piece of equipment and/or gadget that he might need one day?! Really?!

Just the mere fact that he had to look up at the sun to guess the time pisses me off already! Where is his phone? Or at least a f-ing watch? But seriously tho, was he really summoned without any personal items? How is that logical? He was clothed, and not in his birthday suit, so why?!

I hate when this happens in stories. Would it be really too hard to include some every day items that EVERY person would use no matter what? Like, come on, even if he is a mage he would still need a phone amongst other things!

Just visited this story after a few years, I must say it a shame that it got discontinued, but since you still active and writing, I hope that you will come back and continue this story someday

Dude, please continue this one?
Please...

Sheffield is Rin, isn’t she?

Interesting take, looking forward to seeing some more.

This is my favorite familiar of zero story so far and I've been reading all sorts of them since I got hooked on it for awhile. Thank you for all the effort you put into it and for using your skills to make something for us to enjoy. Good luck with your writing, I eagerly await future chapters.

Okay it’s 100% Saito, I’m wondering just what Saito this is, it’s not regular Saito with certainty, there’s just to many possibilities, but everything in this chapter points him to being Saito, not the one we know obviously

Okay, so this guy is probably Saito and I just realized it, it’s possible that considering it isn’t normal summoning magic that it pulled him out of a timeline where he was Gandalfr and it the runes became a noble phantasm which imbued him with the skill to go against emyia like this, what kind of Saito is he I have no clue, it’s possible that this one was one who truly died against Albion or some completely original timeline where he failed to save Louise, after all I have no idea what could have happened for him to have a stealth noble phantasm that could cloak what’s most likely derf from Shirou. Damn now I’m very curious and I know that this isn’t being continued, I wish you would continue this.

Ok imma take a wild guess and say that was captain drake