Oh this is gonna be good

Nice Hope you continue

I hope that you return to end that story I want to see shirou reaction when he see artoria again and I hope the female that has a crush on shirou see their reaction to see shirou death lover back from the living and for louise recognize artoria pendragon the king of knight and the lover of shirou that he was waiting to be in avalon.

Im getting some vibes that the mysterious not-lancelot is going to end up being saito from the original show

Well, since I didn't see. The original, maybe I'll read your semi prelude since the rewrite seems. Dead, all I can judge is this, and that's likely the overall most efficient army killer in existence.

Ouch.

Well, your hints towards unfamiliar made me guess. Correctly, though my. Second guess of. Rin being a prototype like living virus in shiros sword computer wasn't quite correct... Was it?

Ugh, that Drake is the worst. Type of anime girls.

Attacks you aiming to. Kill you and your people.

Gets. Angry when you. Win.

Shiroo, oh Shiro, turning away thinking That, how could you?

Aside from. That, nice chapter. Perseus is the obvious choice as freelancer anywhere (haha, chuchu, you're not, lol)...

really good fanfic so far, everything is interesting, you have some good depths, your good at writing the characters and developing them, I don't personally see any short comings with this story. you even do the "multiple inserts" part of this story in a manner that helps the story along and is a bonus to the story... ussualy when people do multiple inserts, ecspessially when some of the inserts are enemies they don't have good exclamations for why they were also inserted or they are ussualy terribly written if not both. anyway all around really good story and I can't wait to read more

I don't know, I've read some darker toz fics. Where the halcyon days were far more to later chapters...
But yeah, mostly this is where it starts to get dark. Though not quite as strongly as, say, Green sun illuminating the void?

Granted, due to my first ever played infernal 'Hero' char had a similar start to louise in that fic, I will. Always think forst. Towards it... So probably no dragon empire kill. Squad. From. The get. Go, but wards who and what he is, and Albion is 3 seconds before blowing, but...

OK, I have nothing.

As someone with deep foz but only wonky Grail war
Past thenf
Iret
Nknoeledge (younjustndontngetnthenstuffneqsiwly here), I'll still see what a fae empowered enmya might look like, thanks.

God damn this was an amazing ride

Just doing his duty? No, they’re traitors. They didn’t even try to confirm Louis’s claim. An extremely serious claim. They should be killed on the spot and their corpses hung over the entrance as a warning. With a sign, of course, stating that they are traitors.

It’d be funny if after seeing (and fighting) Shirou in action, Wardes decided betrayal was a bad idea.

I like this fic already!

FYI a galleon is not a warship. More like a heavily armed cargo ship.

A weighted tip to a sword is not inherently bad. It increases the strength of blows and increases thrust force. Straight swords, by the way, are meant for stabbing and usually have an only mildly sharpened edge except for a few inches of the tip which are kept very sharp. The rest of the blade is similar to the sharpness of an axe. This enables a longsword in particular to be the Swiss army knife of swords. Bash with the pommel as a made, hold one hand on the hilt and one half down the blade to make a short spear, maneuver the enemy’s body with impacts from the edges with swings and finish off with a thrust backed by your weight. And more.

To be particular, whether or not the King Arthur of Shirou’s world was a woman is unknown to him as what world each Heroic Spirit comes from is different and infinitely many. Such as the male King Arthur that also exists within the Fate series.