Reviews for Hidden Light 2
geminidragon76 chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
I am going to cry here... you have such tension, that it literally had me on edge. I am on close yet so far. I am so rooting for Donnie... I am like hopping on my seat for him to... kiss her... but I like how he is getting a bit flirtatious with his subtle innuendos. Also... the leg stretches were my favorite part... Needs more Donnie checking her out more...with physical therapy like that, I bet April would fake a limp to get Donnie to help her become more limber. Oh man... so many opportune time to get more moments... but all this tension...I bet the fireworks when they do kick it together would make the 4th of July look like Arbor Day.
CrazyGeekyLove chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
Sooo excited about a new chapter and this was just wonderful as per usual. Love the hovercraft and Mikey dancing it up was hilarious. Especially the bits of interaction between him and Raph. And awww at the Donnie/April dancing. Love seeing April's feelings becoming more pronounced. Now she just needs to get the guts to come clean about them.

And what a cliffhanger! Now that Donnie is sleepwalking again he's going to HAVE to take Splinter's advice and tell April too. I am hanging on for more. Hoping that Donnie is safe! Couldn't stand to have another one of them injured badly! The dialogue has been soooo completely cute between them too. All that flirting! Need... more... keep writing!
SleepingSeeker chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
Oh that sweetheart is sleep-walking again!? That dance with her set him off, I'm sure. This chapter had a great feel throughout it. I dunno, the pacing was really good. Well done and upadte soon!
FreyReh chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
it is only because of rage quit slenderman that i'm knowing that a torch is a flashlight... hahaha great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next!
geminidragon76 chapter 7 . 7/11/2013
I really enjoy this story but is seems that Donnie is just gaining himself more pain than anyone else...also that April's suffering too... Why is there so much a barrier? Is this going to be a sad story? Will Donnie take her into his arms & will they confess to each other? Doesn't Donnie have an idea how April feels for him? Why is this so sad? I am about to shake them like an apple tree & tell them to just...argh! just confess & make it work. Besides with all the dimensions...there must be a dimension where they can be together without judgement? What about Usagi's dimension? Despite that, they should be together... because... things can work is like from most books... things tend to work out...besides, normal is not April's thing. Your killing me with feels!
CrazyGeekyLove chapter 7 . 7/10/2013
Eeee. New chapter! I was excited for Casey being awesome with Raph but instead it was just Casey acting like an ass.
Mikey totally stole this chapter. He was hilarious. And is it just me or does April seem really really disappointed that Donnie has never ever made a move. ;-)
Closet Fan chapter 5 . 7/8/2013
I never write reviews but for you, darling, I must! I can't put into words how beautifully you can add detail and character traits without shoving it in the readers face. It's so subtle but SO good! You've absolutely nailed these characters: their voices, actions, trains of thought, interactions with eachother. This is the king of all April and Don fics, and I mean that. It's just the right mix of family, friendship, sweetness and romance (that doesn't make you gag). Not to mention I love this particular TMNT world.

Keep up the wonderful work! I cannot wait to read more :)
SleepingSeeker chapter 7 . 7/10/2013
'It's funny how you don't really appreciate something until you don't have it." Something tells me this is forshadowing. You know, this could be the theme of this entire story. Loved this chapter, when Don remembered the 'mountain' - that was sad to me.

I feel that his fear of her finding his feelings towards her disgusting is great and realistic and very very real for him, probably more so than worrying about what he could give her. Risking his friendship by revealing his feelings would be a huge opening up of his vulnerable heart. and much more so than if this were two humans. It's just so much more risky that he'd lose her! Forever!

He knows what he is. How he's so different from her. It would be assuming a lot to just take for granted that she'd overlook his mutant anatomy. AND! He just has nothing to indicate that she wouldn't find the entire idea of being physical with him horrifying, even twisted and deviant. Poor Don!

I mean, she hasn't given him any CLEAR signs, really, that she has ANY interest in him physically, you know. Like she can tolerate friendship and that's about as far as it can go. I think its time April made a stronger move! Especially now that it's clear in her mind who she doesn't want. C'mon, April! Sometimes we ladies need to tackle our sweet nervous shy terrified men! Take control for what we want! at least if she makes the first move, they could still be friends. Don has much more at stake to lose because of what he is.

And I hope Casey will find happiness. Everyone deserves to be happy. UuuUUUUUupdate soooOOoooon! Or I'll haaauunt yoooouuuu, apparently. O.o boo!
FreyReh chapter 6 . 7/7/2013
read first story and now this... very nice, MOAR! :)
AzizaJade chapter 6 . 7/7/2013
I've really enjoyed your story so far. It's well written too.
ppd123456 chapter 6 . 7/6/2013
Love this chapter! Great update! You write a great Apritello. Always look forward to updates on this fic.
BubblyShell22 chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
Awesome job on this chapter. I liked Don's conversation with Splinter and thought it was well done. Nicely done on this. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.

The Bubbly One,
CrazyGeekyLove chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
I just got the Raph/Casey feels. Not in any sort of shipping way but their scuffle just makes me want to awww.
Love that Splinter is encouraging Donnie too. I could imagine that, he really does want what's best for his sons!
SewerSurfin chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
Awww! I love this chapter! Raph was hilarious, and the moment between Splinter and Donnie was perfect. I cannot wait for more!
SleepingSeeker chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
SO happy you updated! and more to come!? I can't wait! XD

The subtle perfection of this chapter is so wonderful! God, did that even make sense!? The scene with Casey and Raph, oh, I do love that man, I really do! He's like a big overgrown kid, really. And when you gave us that quick flash of how Don got dragged into their wrestling and became a common enemy was hysterical and I could so see it.

Uh, Don it's right there! He can almost touch it, but like the entire scene with Master Splinter and his 'mountain' he's so stubborn and set and full of hidden but deep seated fear, he can't risk seeing it, let alone acting on it! When Don started to break out in a sweat and panic inside with what Splinter was saying before he even really knew it was about HIM, was brillant and very well executed! That entire scene was just. SO great, btw.

C'mon, Donnie, she needs you to tell her! You're not the only one afraid! Ah the sharp, delicate latticework of fear keeping them apart - it's no small thing, but maybe with his father's encouragement he'll find the strength he needs to be courageous in the face of his fear!

P.S. that little note about how Leo is identical to Splinter with his questions that aren't questions was so good! Eeee! Can't wait for your next update! I may reread this as I wait!
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