|Reviews for Incarnate|
| mohdnaved863 chapter 9 . 12/1/2017
Please continue writting.
This story is best.
| yunogasai5540 chapter 9 . 11/27/2017
please you have to update
| Dreiller chapter 9 . 11/20/2017
Well this is interesting! though it would have be great to have a lemon to finish the chapter. I wish to tell you that you never mentioned anyone's age, i think Naruto is 15 but the reste It's still unknown mainly Kisamu and Mei, you also forgot to mention some other characters as Isane where's she? I hope you haven't forget her, if so then you can forget your mass if you already forget this one. Where's White Zetsu ? Collecting information? but which kind? What if during their respective missions Black and White Zetsu meets what will happen? If they fight then White one will fall. Now that Kisame isn't part of Akatsuki who is going to replace him? Hiruko? That will be awesome!
There're more questions I wish to ask but I forget.
Thank you for the story, please continue.
| korlinki chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
if you ask if it's worth reading this abandoned story I tell you it's waste of time.
| Zen chapter 1 . 10/18/2017
Gotta say you r one fucked up freak seriously 17 woman I hope he doesn't dies by sex
| Death Gone Wrong chapter 9 . 10/3/2017
Those who go on hiatus are trash
But those who abandon their story are worse then trash
| zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 9 . 9/18/2017
I'm happy with this kushina. she's not a crying sobbing mess just plain begging or offering things he should have had. she's just actively trying to get him to understand she's sorry and trying to be better about it. she's also a friendly person and enjoyable
| Mariusz1988 chapter 9 . 8/16/2017
Cant weait to see what happens next, please continue.
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 9 . 8/9/2017
Proud and disappointment are my feelings as of now :/
Proud that you could make such a great story in just 9 chapters and disappointed that its been 2 years since the last update and still no sign of a new chapter :'(
Great chapter I must say and if you aren't dead im going to use a rusted kunai and shove it up you know where...;)
So till the next update Ja ne!
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 8 . 8/9/2017
Im slightly disappointed but good chapter I guess tho I still want you to update as soon as possible, if you are not dead that is
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 7 . 8/9/2017
Very good chapter
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 6 . 8/8/2017
Great chapter :) but please update :'(
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 5 . 8/8/2017
Wow great chapter! But I can see you haven't updated this a long time but according to you...you weren't going to abandon this fic but I see otherwise :/ or are you dead? I hope not
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 4 . 8/8/2017
Good chapter :)
| xXHashirama-SenjuXx chapter 3 . 8/8/2017
Good chapter :) although I don't really like gender-bender so im just going to act like sasuko isane and kisamu doesn't exit :)