|Reviews for NU: legend rising|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
i hate Hinata Ino paring with naruto
| Matsumoto chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
This is really good! Can't wait to see more.
| bankai777 chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
you could have Naruto paired up with Shizuka and Arashi gets Hinata.
| digreg chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
NarutoTemari and ArashiHinata
| BrainII chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
The kunoichi of the year being Hinata makes more sense than Kishimoto making Sakura the kunoichi of the year. Useless banshee can't do shit. Please no NaruHina. That pairing is extremely overused ow.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Lame. You couldn't come up with original instead of this garbag loser.
| Sword Ace chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
You shouldn't set a review cap till you update as while you wait for you're reviews your story will fall deeper and deeper into the back log of fanfiction, I have seen many many stories die by holding of fpr reviews instead of updating(which sets your story on the ealier pages.)
Now your story seems like a great idea an I like that Minato is set as the parent that always cares for both children, and Kushina's turn around is good since you have it early enough
Also, now every reader can give good critism and usually stay quiet and let those with more writing experience do ther thing.
| BrainII chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
Decent chapter. Nice to see that the idiotic civilians got put in their place although the entire civilian council should have been put to death for treason and assault on the Hokage's son. As for pairing, please no NaruSaku. There are still a few grammatical errors, but overall, the chapter was definitely a good read. Keep up the good work.
| BrainII chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Pretty good, but you should use commas in a lot of your sentences that needs them. You have a good idea. Looking forward to seeing what will be the civilians' punishment. Anyway, get a beta and keep up the good work