Reviews for The Test of Humanity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was an excellent story, so engaging I read it in one sitting! Thank you so much for sharing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so incredible! I just finished it and I'm left so indescribably happy. Oh, I love it so much. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us. You wrote it years ago, but I am only finding it now; saw Labyrinth for the first time two weeks ago. WONDERFUL JOB I LOVE YOU |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving (LOVING) this so far. I'm smiling like a looney. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s been ages since I’ve read this, so glad I found this again when I’ve made my own profile! I want to say how much I loved that Jareth matures, parallels Sarah’s own growth in her time in the labyrinth. And Sarah, oh my goodness she’s perfect! It’s not easy to make a person her age mature and wise but also somewhat innocent too. You tackled that perfectly, so within character. Thank you for writing, I hope you’ll come back to do more labyrinth stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very enjoyable. :) Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Przeczytałam jednym ciągiem, wczoraj zarwałam noc, to było cudowne, dlaczego już nie piszesz. Wracaj tu do ff. Czekamy |
![]() ![]() ![]() zainteresowało mnie bardzo, zajrzałam tu na chwilę przypadkiem ale zostaję, Ludzki Jareth , chcę to zobaczyć |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Just want to tell you I have written a companion piece to this wonderfully awesome fanfic of yours. You can find it on my account. I hope you like it. I have tried to PM you on it but maybe you are not online often(?). Anyhow, keep up the great work. I look forward to any future fanfics you post. I also hope I have managed to send a few more readers your way. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is simply splendid. I’ve read it before, but am enjoying it again. I especially enjoy how skillfully you give Jareth King’s dialogue an Underground flavor while keeping it free of archaicisms that would more properly belong to King Jareth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story to bits and read it all in a single day! 3 many thanks for the wild ride! What an awesome imagination you have! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very nice story. Thank you for sharing it with us n |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story! I loved the idea, Jareth willingly giving up his power and immortality was surprising but really nice since seeing him on equal grounds with Sarah is a bit rare in fanfictions. I loved how you could easily tell it was still Jareth even though he wasn't the goblin king we all know, you wrote him really really well. Seeing them fall slowly in love instead of in a few days was great and I enjoyed their journey a lot. At the end it felt a tiny bit rushed as Sarah accepts everything quickly but I don't blame you at all. With 29 chapters done and your readers impatiently waiting for the happy end I would've done the same. It also could've turned out to be overkill if you put more explaining in so this was a very fitting end. Loved it a lot! |
![]() ![]() This was a very good story line and different from what I have read so far. Thank you for a fun read and good job. The structure and plot progression were set up very well. The character development was also setup well. Fine job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really didn't want this story to end! You've created such a wonderful world and an amazing plot. Thank you so much for this awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgno... the new year kiss |