|Reviews for Mab & Dip|
| Ascalon Strike chapter 1 . 7/5
I'm not sure if it's criticism... And call me crazy but... You know? This story is like a sports car...
At the begginning you go slowly. But as soon as you press the gas pedal (Around the part where Mabel got mad and went downstairs), you accelerate a lot and everything goes much faster...
Anyway it's been a nice job. It's understandable, so everyone can know what you meant. Nice work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/7
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26
| Molly chapter 1 . 1/24
Wow. Just wow.
| Perry1997 chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
| dipshit chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
| AlexSadlyNotDanvers chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
Mabels hot and i wish she was real. Lucky Dipper. :(
| Dipper chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
hey, i am Dipper. I accidentally went to this site and I just wondered.. Why the FUCK would I fuck with my sister? Oh god, i will go wash my face, . Off.
| Cool1578 chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
May God have mercy on my soul after when i was reading this
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
Very kinky story, a little longer though. Also spell check it a bit. nothing crazy just a few errors here and there
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
I thought that my childhood would end with my favorite cartoon being turned into something scary
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
I am so glad i dont have a fraternal twin.
| BDD0504 chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
this was awesome and descriptive.