Sometimes it taks another person to open your eyes to see what is in front of you. If you play the what if game, you will always lose. Take the chance. Nothing ventured nothing gained.

I love this Callen/Kensi fic! Love how they say "you see me" to each other... it speaks volumes.

Great story, love the CaKe (Callen/Kensi) paring. The ending was great with Kensi turning to Callen. I hope you write more Callen and Kensi stories.

Dreamer

Wonderful, just wonderful.

This is the first Callen/Kensi fic I've read, and I'm hooked. It's great that the characters remain themselves. Callen has a hard time accepting physical emotions/returning them, so thanks for showing that. Kensi is headstrong, and this story kept that.

These two really - mostly Callen - had a hard time accepting these new feelings. Who knows where it might take them in the future?

Great story, but there were minor grammatical errors.

You had me in tears with this end. Absolutely perfect story!
Thank you so much for sharing!

This story is amazing! It's the best Callen/Kensi story I've read so far...
" 'You see me.' (...) it might be Deeks (...) but in the end it makes sense that it is Callen she turns to, has been him all along. " had me almost in tears. This is so beautifully written, I am at a loss for words. Thank you for sharing this unique piece of art!

I love this pairing. Loved the story. I can read and keep rereading this story.

This was a really wonderful story and I loved it!

You write the characters flawlessly and I love them more and more every chapter.

I love how you're writing the relationship between Kensi and Callen so well and still keeping that strong dynamic between Kensi and Deeks, too. It's more realistic for me and I'm really enjoying the story!

I really enjoyed this first chapter! You wrote the characters and the plot incredibly well and I can't wait to read more!

Wow! This is hands down, the best Callen/Kensi fic I've ever read. You are a fantastic writer, and you write the characters so well it's unbelievable. Most CaKe stories are too short and way to direct about their feelings for each other, but I absolutely love how the suspense and feelings build throughout the course of the story. One last thing, haha. I love how you ended the story with Callen going to sleep. (I'm gonna guess that it was symbolic of the fact that he was finally happy and at peace, so it kind of represented a new beginning.) Anyway, AMAZING job(: -Marissa

Great story! I love this pairing.

wow, that fic was fantastic!

Very nice. Great work.