|Reviews for Valentine's Chili|
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/9
They dont need kacl to talk he had a witness to him shooting deeks and tryung to kidnap her
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/9
Om think im done with this story its gonna revolve all round kensi just like every other fucking fanfic
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/9
Ugh shes ruining this already
| ucialum85 chapter 5 . 9/28/2015
What is a hound agent?
How did Jack get to the mission, which is supposed to be super secret?
| RhondaLara chapter 16 . 11/1/2014
I liked it! Hard to write about such things!
| RhondaLara chapter 15 . 11/1/2014
Love the fact that Monty was safe and ok!
Thank you for that!
| RhondaLara chapter 11 . 11/1/2014
Enjoying this story!
| RhondaLara chapter 9 . 10/31/2014
What a wonderful story- Can't wait to continue and read more! Crete has always bern a dream of mine- lucky you! I live across the world in WA State-
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/27/2013
I know it's his mother and everything but you had him forgiving her a little easy for it to seem realistic.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/27/2013
I know this is fiction but it's starting to get a little to out there and sounding silly. How was he able to get even remotely close to their HQ (with a gun in hand no less) without Callen, Sam, and all the other agents all over him?
| DensiLand chapter 9 . 12/23/2013
Half-way through. Really enjoying this mostly "fluffy" Densi. It's a nice break from the angst of the new episodes! My favorite stories are when it's just the two of them. Nice job so far. Always enjoy an anxious Kensi!
| Anon chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Those dang cliffhangers! :D Personally I'm expecting Sam and G to resolve this REALLY fast (like about 10 seconds after Jack cocked the hammer) but I doubt you'll do that.
One question - what the heck is a hound agent? You refer to Kensi that way at least twice.
| Anonn chapter 2 . 11/5/2013
Well, like everyone I'm disappointed it was Jack, although not surprised (only because I already know how long this story is so it wouldn't have made sense for it to be Deeks already). The confrontation was tense, especially Kensi's disclosure about the baby. I was almost hoping she'd text Deeks to let him know it was Jack, just so we could have an interaction like this:
Deeks: You want me to come over there and kick his butt for you?
Kensi: You *do* remember he was a Marine, right?
Deeks: . . . You want me to have Sam come over there and kick his butt for you?
Jack is a real slime as you have him here, and I'm rather disturbed he knows about Fern - really makes me wonder how he found out about that. Looking forward to where this is going.
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Great setup, and I think you have Kensi down really well, especially her dislike of these holidays. Deeks' goofiness is also perfect, and I loved Callen "siding" with Deeks. Oh, and the "Quite being so girly" made me actually laugh out loud.
I wasn't sure when you mentioned the cost of the dinner for one person being $40 if you were trying to imply that it was a fancy restaurant or not, but if so that would actually be a fairly middle range price. If that's what you were aiming for, you hit it dead on, but the expensive ones are more in the $150-$200 range. Just an FYI - not a criticism (not sure how familiar you are with prices here in the States).
Looking forward to reading the rest!
| F Maurice chapter 17 . 10/14/2013