|Reviews for A Master's Return|
| julzdagger88 chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
This is really good! I really like how you went into detail about the stages of meditation and I'm so glad Qui-Gon and Obi-wan could finally reconnect! I'm anxious to see how you will take this - if only Obi-wan can see Qui-Gon and if they can have a real relationship or not. Please update soon!
| Andromakhe chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
Well, I'm glad this is a slash fic and not a romance with Elsa. This was a heartwarming reunion. I love the gentleness and fondness I can feel in every line here.
My only nitpick is Qui-Gon calling Obi-Wan 'Obi.' I don't care for name shortening of that kind as a rule, in any fandom. I know canonically, some have called Obi-Wan that, but it doesn't seem to fit for Qui-Gon to do so.
Otherwise, good chapter.
| OptimusPrimeAddict chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
YAY! They'll find a way to make it work. Somehow. They shall be together! :)
| ruth baulding chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
I love the detailed exposition of the different levels of meditation. Am I seeing Indian philosphical terms there? It goves such a rich depth to the practice. Nice !
| LiquidNitrous chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
This is a great story so far, are you still writing it. If not, please continue it. And if so, then I can't wait for the next chapter!