Reviews for The Guardian and The Warrior
balto90 chapter 20 . 12/1/2014
Love the chapter. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Still hoping that Kopa will feel betrayed by and be pissed with all of the spirits (including his mom) when and if he returns to the pridelands.
Haradion chapter 20 . 11/30/2014
I am enjoying this.
Having Musa as a viewpoint character certainly gives it a different feel.

I liked seeing a bit of Nuka. I enjoy his chapters a lot and wouldn't mind seeing a bit more of him.

That you are still introducing characters is surprising. Have you considered splitting this book in to two, and having a second book?
I only ask because it is getting quite long at this point.

Anyway - this is going well. As I said, I liked the chapter. Nothing to critisise. Keep it up. :D
PrincessAnime08 chapter 20 . 11/30/2014
It's nice seeing more of Musa, it's sad that he died soooo young
Guest chapter 19 . 8/10/2014
Great chapter! I love this story! I wonder what will happen to Nuka next?

P.S. Sorry to hear about your cat. Pets have always been a special part of my family.
PrincessAnime08 chapter 19 . 8/7/2014
Loving this story
balto90 chapter 19 . 8/7/2014
So sorry to hear about your cat. I love the chapter. Also what do you think about a Kopa x Nala pairing.
Haradion chapter 19 . 8/7/2014
For one step moment I had a horrible thought that Zira was going to demand Nuka mate with the lionesses: the one he isn't related to anyway.

An interesting chapter... I wonder why Zira choose this particular method of training? Perhaps to integrate nuka into the southern and western Prides?
I feel like there is some other motive at work here...

Either way, it was a fascinating chapter, with a lot of new things...
Great work.
mf96 chapter 18 . 7/17/2014
Loving the story so far! can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 18 . 6/14/2014
Hey just wondering when next chapter will be posted. Amazing work
A Fan chapter 18 . 5/3/2014
It's nice to see Kiara's character developing. And the part with her and Nala playing together was cute! Didn't expect to see the eastern pride again. I have to admit I completely forgot about them XD This alliance between the prides sure makes the story even more interesting
balto90 chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
Love the chapter the plot is thickening, also I think it would be an excellent twist if there is a Kopa/Nala pairing
balto90 chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
Love the chapter, the plot is thickening. Also I think that it would be an excellent twist if there is a Kopa/Nala pairing.
TRON0602 chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
I thought this chapter was very cute to read in my opinion. I loved Kiara and Nala playing the rain. I agree that it is fun to play in the rain
thingsareweird chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
Thanks for the update.
rafigreen chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
Nice chapter and keep up the good work!
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