Reviews for Solving a Riddle: A-Z |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there; Happy to hear that! No worries though, better take your time to do it well than a rushed ending and all that. Hope you (and your loved ones) are doing well, Looking forward to reading your work! KnM |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have always loved this story of yours, but every time I read this, I find myself annoyed by a small time inconsistencie in this chapter. As you are planning to edit anyway, I thought I'd mention this now. In this chapter (27), Zia and little Tom have moved into their new house. They sleep one night, and in the morning Zia leaves to buy groceries. On her walk there Tom senior rides up behind her on a horse, where he stops an acts kindly twards with her. The issue is in this sentence (He looked down at the woman who had appeared at his house years ago...). This sentence makes no sense, by your own time-line she only met him three days before? Also, if the time-line is correct, his change in behavior has happened way to fast to be believable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My eyes went so wide when I saw this had an update. Thank you for not giving up on it! I’d always loved this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm tearinh up. Author-sama thank you for your kind words! I am now filled with utter glee to knowing that you have not abandoned this other worldly story! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for never giving up on this, I've always wanted to know how this story was to end. So looking forward to reading your edits and updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do phones even exist in the 20's? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ty for never giving up on this story its so well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it... Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am SO looking forward to this! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Sincerely, L |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I love this story and I'm so glad that you're going to be continuing it! Can't wait to see the rest of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVE your take on it. Keep up the fantastic work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super excited thanks for continuing to share your awesome writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you Looking forward to new updates |