Reviews for Card Captor Ashura: Red Dawn
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 10 . 12/28/2014
What's wrong with Ash? It seems that Lance knows that he's not Ashline, yet he doesn't care. Being exposed to Ashline's memories is affecting his mind a little. Isn't he there to collect the next shard and alter that dimension's future? In the future, didn't Ashline's world ended when she destroyed the entire universe or something like that?
kawaiilileevee chapter 10 . 12/26/2014
I wonder why Lance has self-confidence issues? Oh well! This was a very sweet, making love type of piece and I liked it. I'm glad Red and Lance have each other... and coconut oil *wink*
kawaiilileevee chapter 9 . 12/26/2014
...Aww, this chapter was mostly flashbacks. I'm glad you posted two chapters then! And Red really is kind enough to forgive Lance. I think Lance needs forgiveness... he has a very low opinion of himself, which is weird. Maybe he's so arrogant because he's scared inside?
kawaiilileevee chapter 8 . 11/27/2014
I see! Ash is the evil one and Red is the one Lance loves. That is kind of unfair to Ash but Ash is dumber than Red. And I like Red better too! I hope we get a lemon in the next chapter! I would love to see Red seduce Lance! But Lance as Neptune and Red as Uranus is a bit strange. I would have thought it would be the other way around...
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 8 . 11/27/2014
Nice one. Can't wait for the next one.
Jarrod chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
I have read most of your cardcaptor ashura ff's and update faster these are my favirote fanfiction please
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 7 . 6/4/2014
Nice chapter. Great job.
kawaiilileevee chapter 7 . 6/3/2014
So we find out what happened to Ash! Red possessed him! I guess I'm glad Ash and Jessie got together although I can see why Red wasn't happy... and Red was kind of harsh but Ash deserved it, spoiled little brat! Kanto won, yay! I wonder if Red will visit again?
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 6 . 5/29/2014
Nice chapter as always.
kawaiilileevee chapter 6 . 5/26/2014
This was a great chapter! I really liked how you introduced Saber, Sabrina's father. The name fits and I bet he would have an Alakazam! So Clair is a wild card in this male-dominated culture, eh? It would be nice to stop the war with a duel between Ash/Red and Morty. Lance as an eunuch? That's creepy! But the shard was avarice. Hmm...
Guest chapter 5 . 5/19/2014
Why is Ash with Jessie of all people? I hope he dumps her!
kawaiilileevee chapter 5 . 5/13/2014
Ash is with Jessie? No wonder Red is unhappy! I bet Lance would be unhappy too! How are they ever going to fix this timeline? Wow, Ash really seems like an idiot, squandering his inheritance, having no interest in battling, sleeping with different girls, and being looked down upon. At least now Red and Sabrina can hopefully fix things. If Lance is the keeper of Ash's harem, then is he gay? Red is still kind of an idiot but I guess it could be worse... thanks for updating!
kawaiilileevee chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Wow, this is awkward... poor Lance and poor Red, too! Sex is not love and they have a lot of memories and bitter threads to work through, don't they? I liked how at the beginning Lance was wondering if she turned him gay but it was sweet of Red to say that he loved her/him irregardless of gender! And then they went on a date and Lance did not take advantage of Red...
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 3 . 3/28/2014
Hey, it's me. Nice chapter. So if Ash and Lance took the lies that their parallels will have, that means that they'll have to stay away from each other, but will meet up sometimes since they promised each other.
kawaiilileevee chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
This chapter was very introspective but I like how you explain why Lance chose to commit suicide and how it is a selfish choice! And Red swore on his power to never leave her. If that's not binding I don't know what is... and Lance is right, he may not like her once he sees the other shards out there, but he promised he wouldn't leave...
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