Reviews for Guilty
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6
This one has potential to be a good story other than a one shot. I hope you continue it one day.
Sato-chan chapter 1 . 1/22/2018
I prefer the official ending thanks, the other ending is not coherent at all, that is, if the boy was a victim of rape, he would not think of voluntarily staying with his aggressor... I hope you can continue this fic because I would like to see more chapters, sayonara Sato-chan comes out.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
Was this a one-shot? Or are you going to continue this? Because omg, I want this to be a whole story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
I actually liked the first ending (at the bottom) better but they were both really good. You should turn this into a story instead of just a one shot. The lemon was good too
silvergolddragon chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
i like this but the old ending is better than the new one it gives a sense of season zero and some of DM Yami
Cay Ezemay chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Are you going to add more to this? it seems like you could add more to it.
solitaireseraphim.silvertaciturn chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
Great! I love your story! I want it to continue. I want Yugi to be happy with Yami outside the prison.
Davinia chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
I agree with many of the other reviewers, this would most certainly make a good longer story. Yamis side of the story for the murders, or just telling Yugi his reasons would be enough reason to continue on its own but there is also Yugis case and whether he really is innocent or not. As well as the inner workings of the prison and the forming relationship between the pair. Other inmates may try to claim Yugi, maybe theyd even be successful ad cause a rift. What if Yami kills someone in protecting Yugi and is moved to solitary or yugi is given parole or even proven innocent and released? Heh so many questions left unanswered but sometimes that is the purpose of a one-shot; merely a means to stoke the flames of curiousity and let the mind wander.
yu-gi-ohlove3 chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
um at first I got a deadman wonderland vibe from this but then it went away pretty good :)
LittleSnowChild chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
if it's only one shot then the old ending is definitely much better than the new one
YamiNoIcexIcuo chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I liked the old one better, the new one just leaves so much to the imagination. But good job!

ak chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
I think I prefer the new ending cos I hate seeing yugi so submissive could you write more chps please and don't make things easy for yami the pushy jerk
Fragments of Imagination chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
I wonder who was the real murderer? Poor Yugi
yuimomo chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
I love thid story, please continue
ChibiLee chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
aw kawii :D
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