Reviews for Omniscient Linguistic
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Omg omg omg. I loved that. ESPECIALLY when Sherlock joined him! . That was lovely. [:
clejssaasa chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Beautifully written! I love Sherlock's concern, mostly.
Venenum Timere chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Ohh, that was rather poetic! Nicely done and well written- I sure love the rain.
writerfan2013 chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
I like the idea behind this. I write first and third person POV and lots of dialogue in both styles so something without dialogue is hard for me to read. You use long sentences here which adds to the dreamy sense of it - I felt that a couple of these could have been broken up to give more sense of the actions of the characters. Liked the last sentence though.

Good luck with further experiments - one of the big benefits of fanfiction is that you can do whatever you want however you want - and get feedback!

-Sef
PS How about 2nd person POV? It ought not to work but actually it often does!