Reviews for Batman
Old Toad chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
Short, but a commendable effort.

You've got the metre right and the alliteration too pretty well. The last three lines need attention.

NB: an earlier reviewer was wrong: Anglo-Saxon poety was NOT written in iambic pentameter.
tailar chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Nice! I love Batman! He's absolutely my favorite! You had a typo in 'vengeance', and another in one of the 'the's. I like the tiger/cubs analogy!
simonwho chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
I enjoyed your beowulf themed writing of The Batman very well. However, I do not see the use of iambic pentameter as was used in the writing of Beowulf. Consider rewriting this and I'm sure you will be much happier with the results.
Abigail Marie chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
That was good! I haven't exactly read Beowolf but I've heard a lot about it. I'm a big Batman fan so yeah. It was great!
Bat-Cat chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
Wow! That was really good! You should write more!