|Reviews for Batman|
| Old Toad chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
Short, but a commendable effort.
You've got the metre right and the alliteration too pretty well. The last three lines need attention.
NB: an earlier reviewer was wrong: Anglo-Saxon poety was NOT written in iambic pentameter.
| tailar chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Nice! I love Batman! He's absolutely my favorite! You had a typo in 'vengeance', and another in one of the 'the's. I like the tiger/cubs analogy!
| simonwho chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
I enjoyed your beowulf themed writing of The Batman very well. However, I do not see the use of iambic pentameter as was used in the writing of Beowulf. Consider rewriting this and I'm sure you will be much happier with the results.
| Abigail Marie chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
That was good! I haven't exactly read Beowolf but I've heard a lot about it. I'm a big Batman fan so yeah. It was great!
| Bat-Cat chapter 1 . 9/26/2002
Wow! That was really good! You should write more!