|Reviews for The Boy Who Found Fear At Last|
| Jewel Becky chapter 6 . 2/16
It is weird that even though Jack thought he had a great sense of time, the illusion of the maze twisted time enough that the months he was in there weren't true, it was only a day or two in the real world.
But I like how North says Jack was the only one to bring joy to the kids when the others couldn't as he did so up close and personal and his centre of fun and joy was there from the beginning. Plus he wanted to have fun and see the joy in the faces himself so being with the kids even without them knowing he was there was what he did no matter what.
| Jack Snip chapter 6 . 2/7
Wow! I powered through the whole series in one night-it's amazing! Please tell me there's gonna be more and it'll update soon!
| Jewel Becky chapter 6 . 1/28
Jamie owns the sword of Camlot, now that is a plot twist!
| everydaytimelord chapter 1 . 1/19
So this story messed me up a bit. I got to the fifth chapter and I just could not go on. The feelings were so intense and the situation is so dark, I... I just could not find the will to go on. I felt what Jack must have been feeling, the only difference was that I had the choice to walk away, and I did.
I will never say that this is a bad thing. I can only express how impressed I am with your writing skills for this to happen at all. If I truly love a story, I will feel it. This story sent me close to depression, and I hate going there, but to be able to get there by simply reading words on a monitor is simply astonishing in my eyes. I cannot imagine how you are able to manipulate words so well, but I applaud you. I aspire to be as talented as any one of you, and I thank you for your time and story. I promise to finish once I gain back my courage, and I know I will enjoy every last word.
| DadiDa chapter 1 . 1/9
No time for a full review but I would like to at least say that I really love your work. All three of you make it such an enjoyable series for me, and even if ROTG never gets a sequel, I'd just take your GoSU series as Canon. I would definitely pay to read your published work! :D
| Intoxity chapter 6 . 1/6
You know, usually writers butcher their story by making it super depressing with a bad ending. I am so glad you have kept Jack in character and made it realistic. I am actually very proud of never losing faith in Jack, and you didn't let me down. I expect great things, this fiction is one of the best I have ever read.
| RadicalCat chapter 6 . 12/30/2013
I am delighted this story is still as solidly written and focused as it was in the beginning. I somehow missed the update alerts and looked it up on a whim to find 3 new chapters!
A lot has happened in the story between then and now- and I was pleased that this story sated my 'dark angsty Jack' tastes but ultimately let the 'good wholesome Jack' find his way out. Having Jack deceive Pitch and turn on him at the last minute was really the only way this could have ended without damaging Jack's core character. I'm glad the story didn't take a turn down the cliche'd 'love will cure all' route by having the Guardians save Jack as opposed to him saving himself, but didn't take away the damage he's suffered. I was also pleased (and saddened) to read the fate of Kozimotis's story- while we all knew where it was going there was still hope for Nightlight and Rashena. I have hopes that a half completed spell and some magical story telling means it wont be the end of them just yet in this fictionverse.
I am very much looking forward to seeing how this begins to wrap up and how Jack can possibly begin to heal now the ordeal is over. I am also looking forward to seeing more of the big four's interpretations as they try to care for Jack. Their view was missed in the last three chapters- but the story didn't lack for it; it was Jacks and Pitch's story from the beginning.
As always; this collaboration is very focused and the authors aren't afraid to put in the time and do their research; even to the point of using personal experiences to express what their characters are going through. It is refreshing to see such a varied selection of words and descriptions.
I will quiet happily be first in line when their book is available.
| Jokermask18 chapter 6 . 12/7/2013
| Stormgirl415 chapter 6 . 12/3/2013
This chapter...holy moly, it was intense. The whole interaction with Pitch and Jack was just scary, especially with the way Pitch kept twisting things, even with the little moments where we see Jack's rebellious streak. I really want to know how he was able to overcome that though. And how long did he actually spend in the maze? Because from the looks of it, it definitely wasn't as long in the real world as it was for Jack. And geez...Jack has a lot of healing to do to fix his head, I hope the Guardians and Jamie can help.
In terms of comic relief moments, Jamie with Excaliber is kind of fantastic XD
Beautifully written, please update again as soon as possible!
| crazylilgrace chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
you guys are awesome writers!
| Uovoc chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
What. Have. You. Done.
I kept thinking, What is he doing, Jack would never side with Pitch, have you guys completely forgotten his center?! And yet the big reveal took me completely by surprise.
It was very satisfying.
| livingwithbooks chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
oh god ooh noooooo
poor jack ;A;
| Auua Ytjoml chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
Wow. I read "Jack struck- Backwards" and I immediately scrolled all the way back up to the top and read the entire thing again. Was. Not. Expecting. That.
Jamie's sword is just the bit of absolutely ridiculous humor to offset the rest.
| Trumpet-Geek chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
Wow this chapter was fantastic! I loved the hints throughout that Jack was not quite as meek and submissive as he seemed.
| Magiccatprincess chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
Even though I skipped the first part(I take warnings seriously) I loved the confrontation, I really hope you guys update soon