This was really sweet

Heartfordshire is northwest from Kent, isnt it?

wasnt the supper set dance before and after supper?

Calculating Wickham's debt in dollars instead of pounds, shillings and pence is improbable. And, of course, the amount is way too much. Think of the Dashwoods: a genteel family of four living on 500 pounds per year.

Whoops! You might have overlooked this, but you made Elizabeth say “dollars” instead of pounds. It hasn’t distracted from the story though.

I'm glad Mr. Darcy didn't follow through with his plot for revenge. Elizabeth balances him so well while smoothing his rough edges wonderfully. Enjoyable story!

Loved this story. Darcy and Elizabeth really communicate a lot...we get a lot of insight into their thoughts. Not a super fan of the trick on Caroline, as Darcy wouldn't stoop to that...it was beneath him. Worked ok for a plot point, just out of character and could have still ended in disaster if tried in real life.
Lovely job overall...loved the interaction.

Very nice story! Thank you for writing this!

Fun!

great story, thank you!

this was fantastic! my favorite part was in the beautiful thematic symmetry. from the very beginning to the end, you showed how rumors could be used as both a weapon and a tool. you explored how powerful and dangerous they were in relational development and status, as well as how they were influenced by gendered disparities and class inequalities.

Thank you! It was fabulous. I hope you will write a sequel. ️️️

Thx was a delight of a piece to read! Kept me guessing throughout and paid good homage to the characters themselves.

This was so good, I really enjoy this story. I hope to read more of your writing in the future

I love that phrase “painfully handsome”