Reviews for Kakashi's Kid
Nobody Smurf chapter 35 . 4/11/2019
Death threats and blackmail at a wedding. Ninja or mafia, take your pic.
KanaxNeji?
And of course there are no military uses for tags that hide a puppeteers' chakra strings.
Poor Naruto. He's have enjoyed the show.
Hinata is terrifying when she's properly motivated. Fighting against family isn't proper motivation for her.
Ouch is right. Those two are going to be BFF now, aren't they?
Random. Totally random. Not rigged at all. And that beach front property in Wyoming is a real bargain.
Those were some fun fights. It says something about Hinata that Neji had to beat her that hard to put her down. Naruto really dodged a bullet there.
Gaara didn't lose it this time. That spells good things for him, I hope.
And of course the feathers.

I'm a bit confused. Who did Gaara kill?
Next? Hinata is down and vulnerable. In canon didn't Kumo try to kidnap her from the hospital while everybody was kung-fu fighting?
Don't worry, everybody forgets Shino. He's actually scarily competent, but his bugs wouldn't last long trying to eat Fluffy's chakra.

Thank you.
Nobody Smurf chapter 34 . 4/11/2019
Kana has made a grave error. Hiruzen is going to foist things off on her as his new body double.
Was Mei repeating something Kakashi said to her?
That was illuminating. Like a light coming on. Brilliance that rolls like thunder.
Dual /opposing/ natures? That is going to be a joy to train.
That combination isn't going to attract attention, no sir.
Mei and Shisui ganging up on a couple of kids? What would their mother and sensei have to say about that?
That was an interesting admission. I wonder what Itachi is up to these days.
Revolving Door Technique. XD
Nobody Smurf chapter 33 . 4/11/2019
Gel. Lots of gel. And by gel I mean rubber cement. Epoxy is too stiff.
They are ninjas taking a ninja test. If they aren't cheating, they aren't trying. I mean, Oto snuck in a freaking pedosnake.
If the snake-sage is there and hasn't killed you, it means he finds you amusing, or worse, /interesting/. Just killing you is the nicest of the three.
Say what you will, but Sakura is actually pretty bad-ass when she's paying attention.
Those are terrible puns. Even hardened ninja consider that a war crime.
Your mind-games are well played.
Or she just tapped out the codes for 'evacuate civilians to the bunkers' and 'form a conga line' and everybody is too confused.
Yakumo is a scary scary girl when she's motivated. Yikes.
Kana is going to get a talking to from Hiruzen about using codes above her clearance.
I like Kato. He's a man his father can be proud of. XD

It is good to know that you have finally found yourself. :)
Hxkumei chapter 35 . 4/9/2019
This is actually a really great book, please update!
Alyss Penedo chapter 35 . 4/9/2019
"I could kiss that boy!"
*Kakashi side-eyes dangerously*
"I could shake that boy's hand from a safe distance!"
XDDDDDDDDD

imma go reread alllll of this now, it's still v good and every new chapter makes it better :3
lizyeh2000 chapter 35 . 4/9/2019
Thanks for updating! It’s starting
Mystic Moon Flower chapter 35 . 4/8/2019
Yesssss! An update! You made my day! ;)
omnipotent Porunga chapter 35 . 4/8/2019
Your Yakumo and Shisui scenes are always a delight.
Thank you for the double work for this chapter.

Looking forward to the survival of the 3rd. Also fingerscrossed for Kana being a part of the Tsunade retrieval team. Gives us a chance to workout a confrontation with Itachi (a lot of potential there!)
Kana can even get taken (willingly?) and I can see her getting along famously with Kisame.
That gives us an opportunity to meet with Nagato.
I am not giving up on the plan to save Pein. Just remember the three of them in the frog suits! The cutest team flashback in the whole series! You have the power to alter the tragedy of Jiraiya too. Kana can somehow use the chance to communicate with Nagato and warn against the truth about Zetsu (the true villain)!

Hoping for the best alterations Kana can bring about and save a lot of tragedies from happening.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/7/2019
You are such a cool author
Guest chapter 34 . 4/7/2019
There is so much feeling
Guest chapter 29 . 4/7/2019
ISN'T HE
ISN'T HE UR BOYFRIEND

SASUKE FOUGHT QUITE HARD FOR YOU

I'm weak.
Papa Kakashi is killing me
BurningSaiyan chapter 35 . 4/7/2019
That was a tremendously boring chapter pretty much copied Canon completely, nobody used any new or interesting strategies they'd have come up with in this different timeline, just a very blah chapter. But if you were stuck on this chapter a long time and are now going to be able to move forward with good chapters I'm fine dealing with this bad one.
B.Boppolop.p chapter 35 . 4/7/2019
Okay, have I ever mentioned that I /love/ how you do fight scenes from the perspective of Kana like that? Lots of side commentary and such always has me giggling a little even when it’s serious because I usually relate to it.
The wedding was pretty quick. I almost forgot it was part of the chapter. It was pretty sad for Naruto lol poor kid.
The fact that it ended up similar to canon regardless makes me happy, oddly enough. I love how it’s a little mixed up too!
Definitely looking forward to more!
Linnorria chapter 35 . 4/6/2019
Such a great chapter! I thought the wedding sounded wonderful and given that kana wasn't feeling great during it that seemed like plenty of description to me. I think the idea of her getting apprentices when she herself is barely a genin has some delicious irony to it. But since she's a successful business person who has been working with seals for years it also is getting to the point where it is necessary!

I also enjoyed the views on her friendship with Naruto and the hyuugas. It was sad to see that her meddling didn't seem to work as well as she hoped. Hopefully Hinata wasn't quite as badly injured and is in the hands of prepared medics. :/

And that ending! With the genjutsu! Ahhhh! It looks like the invasion is happening after all. I am looking forward to seeing how different things will be from here on out. I imagine that certain events could be changing quite a lot.

Thanks for writing. I always enjoy this story.
Wawa4Me chapter 35 . 4/6/2019
It’s so interesting to hear how you write, I usually just write a ton in one go and if I have ideas for scenes ahead of where I am writing then I write them out in small blurbs and then go back to just writing. But this shows me the much bigger benifits of stopping and planning a little bit more before going in and writing a scene, and it sounds like a good way not to get stuck in moving forward in the story. Anywho, you’re writing is awesome as always update when you can but don’t stress yourself out!
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