|Reviews for The Daughter|
| Benkins chapter 6 . 2/16
Ahhhhhhhh thank you for this! I love this continuity and it's always a joy to come back and watch your add new layers to it. I want sooooo badly for Claire/Remus to be a thing so they can make wonderful beautiful babies. The women in this chapter and Remus just radiate off the page and I want to take them home with me so they can give me wonderful happy stories forever and ever. Love you!
| writemeaway chapter 5 . 10/15/2013
I am all for Remus getting his happy ending. It was so sad that everyone found love but him.
I'd love for Hermione and Sirius to have another little one, but maybe not for a little while? It would be nice to see more father-daughter moments before another is introduced into the picture
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
I seriously can't wait to see how you develop the story!
| Angelus Draco chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
I do wonder where Bella's baby is.
I'm very curious about where Fleur went off to. I'd love Hermione and Sirius to have another baby.
I look forward to seeing what happens next.
| Benkins chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
Stop making me fall in love with your OTPs. It's already enough that you've refashioned these characters I love into intriguing new lives (loved the use of Mad-Eye here ;) ), but to make awesome new ones on top of that...that's just not fair.
The scene between Hermione and Sirius was sizzing, Margo. I could hardly contain myself, your prose had such a profound effect on my physiology. Usually it takes more than words to have that happen, but you've found such magnificent, sultry ways of making these two constantly pleasure each other that I can't help but grow aroused.
Finally, the bit with Luna and Lucius. I'm glad she broke it off with him, but that mention of Riddle's child and Bella was sufficiently frightening. There is a very clear shadow hanging over the heads of these characters, and I can't wait to see it fall.
In all, the perfect balance of sweetness, spice, and plot development that mark a great rileypotter17 chappie. I was thoroughly delighted from beginning to end.
Keep up the excellent work, dear. :)
| InvisibleMoony chapter 4 . 8/8/2013
Wow, I loved this chapter!
A bit of Claire/Remus action in the nexter chapters is awaited
And I dont know why, but I think Lunas letter is really, really important... and ooow, the little Bellatrix/Tom child :)
Maybe Narcissas future playmate?
| Luna Lily Tonks chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
Amazing! It's crazy how much I love this story! Remus and Claire, is looking good. :) Whats in Luna's letter? Please update soon, I can't wait! XD
| D chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Must know what lunas letter says ! so good!
| articcat621 chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
ohhh, just caught up on this! Absolutely love it :)
| mwah.x chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
I really like this new character and I am looking forward to the new plot twists you are forming and what's in store for all involved. I really like how you're playing out this story, it's coherent and it makes me want to read it.
| InvisibleMoony chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
Hey, I catched up, like I said I would!
I even did it in less than ten minutes, but that's beside the point! I actually like Claire, which is a surprise because normally I don't like OCs, but she seems to be really nice...perfect for someone who is really sad right now...*pointing inconspicuously towards my account name*
Loved the chap, love the story, love updates!
| InvisibleMoony chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Ooh, you posted a sequel, to my favorite AU story!
You wouldn't believe how happy I am right now!
Thank you for posting tje sequel, I didn't start to read it (yet) but I am sure it is as great as The Lover (if not better!)
| Benkins chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
This was a great chappy, RP! It was nice meeting a new OC, since I liked your last one so much and Claire is shaping up to be a lovely player in this story.
The bit at the beginning with Snape and Dora was a good tease. It left me wanting more, not just smut but also in terms of their relationship and future.
But the best part is still Hermione's personality and distinct voice. I love how you write her and can't wait to see what's next in her life.
Love always. ;)
| mwah.x chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Really nice follow on from your first chapter. I love the grief in this chapter it really ties the two stories together and I also love the levels of grief you have used with Sirius/hermione and Remus. I creates a lovely contrast In the characters. Looking forward to the next update.
| VenusIHH chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Ahhh I just adore this couple! And the party was so sweet, Remus is so adorable. I love the plot that's already coming in with bellatrix's son...I wonder what you've got planned...Great chapter :-) x