Reviews for Burnt Pancakes
Thornsword chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
it was cute, but you need to space things out more cus people tend to either get lost or miss half the story when there is just one big block of words.
but I think it was a really good story.
TheJRose chapter 2 . 1/5/2014
oh I'm so sorry to hear you are going to have surgery I had one too :( well hope you get better soon 3
Flora chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
LOVED IT! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
This story is way to jumbled together and hard to read. It's lacking lot's of detail. I'm not trying to sound rude but this isn't considered a story or even a one shot, its just a bunch of ideas getting shoved into a paragraph.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
awwwww this gets me every time and to think it was uploadet yesterday and i have read it how fifteen times?
Gkyhdjr chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Gkyhdjr here! Thank you guys so much! I love all of you! Thank you for all the "awwww so cutes" and also telling me im getting better with each story. :) I love you all so much! The next story I write I have some interesting news! So make sure to look for my next story! (Of course it will be a kid flash jinx) :)
Byeeeeee!
ps: don't be afraid to critique it in any way! 3
HihihahaMUAHAHAHA chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Awww soo sweet make another story please cause with every storie youre getting better
Kelly chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
FUNNY. :D