|Reviews for Girl-to-Boy|
| xMyxHappyxEndingx chapter 20 . 11/29/2013
OMG!MY FRIENDS NAME IS ANGIE AND SHE LOVES YOUR STORY!
| Majorelle chapter 20 . 10/20/2013
Okay, okay, I just cannot sit by and watch this happen.
I frankly have to say that I'm getting sick of how some people are getting a tickle up their asses to say LadySilentEagle's FIRST story was "mediocre", "cliche", "predictable" and "boring". Yes, I will not be the first to admit that she could improve, but not everyone's writing style is perfect, and somewhere in the future she will have improved tremendously. She is new to writing here, so it's not a bad to thing to give her a good pat on the back and words of praise. Especially since this was her FIRST story.
My first Contestshipping story was unbelievably cliche and no one chewed my head off or critiqued the crap out of it. Now, since I am not the author here, I am not going to point fingers and yell. But what I will say is: LadySilentEagle is a wonderful writer. Her style is great, and while I will admit that she has faults in her writing, she can ALWAYS improve. She can always improve her characterization and her plot, and I believe she will. Just not on this story. Her first story.
All I'm saying is cut her some slack. She could probably write better than all of you, better than me (lol everyone's better than me XD). But it is wrong when people just go out and say all those things and at the end say "I just want you to improve," BS!
| CitySkyline chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
Ok. I'm just gonna go ahead and say this. This was really, really cliche. The most cliche of all the cliche CS stories (Okay not really, but for emphasis I'm saying this.) Paul was suuuper OOC, but I liked his nice side a little. Maybe it's just me. Drew also, I feel he wasn't nearly obnoxious enough.
Also, another bone that I have to pick is the super long loving confessions of love, which seemed really over the top. Anyway, more on characterisation. Ash, Dawn and Misty were all great. May was different, but in a good way-I liked the cool, spunky May you brought out.
The plot twists were admittedly mediocre but it wasn't a bad read. I did like the slow development of May and Drew's relationship, but the other's not so much. It was all love at first sight, perfect pairings. I was like c'mon, where's all the action? Some more love complications and less dying people complications would've been interesting. I found the perfect relationships incredibly unrealistic.
I liked how the guys interacted with each other, their friendship was pretty well written. However, I feel like your writing could be improved with a lot of practice-which I noticed nearing the end of your fic. At the beginning, it seemed a little rushed but it was nice to see you putting out longer chapters.
I'm gonna say that this review was a little harsh, and probably not the '10/10 AWSUM READ' everyone else most likely gave you. But hey, I'm ballsy. And I wanted to give you my honest opinion so that you can improve in the future. I admire your commitment, though.
Hmm...a rating...I'll say 6/10. Somewhat average, but you have potential.
Post script-posting this from non-anon because I'm not a pussy.
| Slywriter450 chapter 20 . 10/1/2013
This is one of those stories that I happened to fall upon but it is one of the best I have ever read. The plot was perfect for the slow steady meathodical way of making normal life interesting and having the bad guys not take up too much of the plot was well exicuted and I just loved this story and will forever be one of my cherished fanfic reads of which I now have three and am probably going to be cursing u out in a week for not making it "long enough". But u did an amazing job and u should always keep writing!
Thx for the story
| CookiesNCreamNess chapter 20 . 10/3/2013
Amazing! Best story ever! I started reading and just couldnt stop! I would have never expected chapter 19 :D
| malory79080 chapter 20 . 9/24/2013
OMG, ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ! Tell me when you do another one!
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/22/2013
| Heart chapter 20 . 9/21/2013
This is I'll Break Your Heart. I'm using my iPhone and I dont know how to sign in but...
Anonymous how dare you. LadySilentEagle just finished her story, her commitment for three months and you have the audacity to give her a C? You clearly do not understand how this works. She just gave us a story, a wonderful story, which made all us fans happy. If you think you can flame her and get away with it, think again. We're all contest shippers here, so no flaming no hating. And cliche my ass, I was in the edge of my seat last chapter. Anonymous, LadySilentEagle is a real person, who has real feelings. I think if I read a review like this, I would feel sad. Please don't make people feel sad.
Sorry if I offended you,
| littlepinksock chapter 20 . 9/23/2013
Squeeee! That was such a cute story, you rock!
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/21/2013
So adorable :) sigh
| The Trump Card chapter 20 . 9/21/2013
May married Drew! She survived! The school's co-ed! But more importantly...
May MARRIED Drew
Last chapter she was crying tears of hatred, this chapter she cries tears of joy!
K-I-S-S-I-N-G! I love whenever they kiss it's like the first time!
| AdorableSkitty chapter 20 . 9/23/2013
That was awesome! I really loved this story. You should write more Contestshipping stories!
| The Meditating Espeon chapter 20 . 9/22/2013
Beautiful, amazing just WOW
| MidnightSeas16 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
It's over. I'm still trying to get this through my head. Great chapter, great ending, overall a great story. I can't wait to see what you'll do next.
| Anonymous chapter 19 . 9/19/2013
The story is pretty good, suddenly your chapters improved and got longer, so I'm praising you.
I honestly think it COULD be written better:
IT WAS REALLY CLICHE.
The story plot is good and everything, but this chapter was the most cliche thing I've ever read.
Also, Drew... he's not even Drew. To me, in this story, he's 100% out of character.
Paul was out of character, too.
There were many, many cliche scenes in this. Sorry. I get this is fanfiction, but it's like... I can't even.