I've been looking for a great time travel fic for awhile now and ran into yours. I do liked that you were able to stick so close to the original timeline and still give it a bit of a twist. Good job. :D

This was amazing! The poem at the end of the story was doubly amazing! Think you could ever see your way to doing a continuation wherein Buffy falls in love with Spike?

poor spike having giles do that to him

See what I mean? Willow now knows all his sob story. If he should chose to share his tragic past with anyone it should be buffy, as much as I like willow, in this situation she feels like nothing more than an intruder.

I don't like this chapter :( willow is getting too much information. Is no memory sacred anymore. A lot of those scenes were valuable from the fact that no one had to know.

Spike has been sobbing for the last 5 chapters, he's getting so annoying. I get it, he's hurting, still, all he's doing is crying. Don't even feel any sympathy for him anymore.

Aw, Spike's soul is really sweet and awkwardly endearing.

I know this story is 10 years old but I've just found it and have SO enjoyed it. I hate time travel and normally avoid them but this was so engaging and extremely well written. Literally couldn't put this down!

Love Harmony here. Always good to see bits of her here and there.

Nice story. Just finished.

That was phenomenal. It really felt like genuine Buffy. Amazing work!

Lovely story. Thanks for writing and sharing it.

yessssssssssssssssSPIKES THE HERO

YIPPEE DOC'S DEAD DOES A HAPPY DANCE

poor spike he tried so hard to stop joyce dying