|Reviews for Those Lifeless Eyes|
| Nom de Plume chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
'Zombie-love' isn't an entirely uncommon concept but I think you're one of the few who actually remembers to keep the "unromantic" things in mind such as the stench of decay, their 'food' preference, and things inside falling apart to the outside. But of course, all of that is already characteristic of the HTF!world.
I find it strange though how Flippy still maintains enough brain function to talk and sense Flaky's discomfort... I get that that's a convenient device to have if you want to have any kind of undead love at all but if this were to be a full-blown story (which it definitely does have the potential to be) then I would have liked to see that explained away. Also, interesting to note was how you kept Flippy's eyes lifeless and yet everything else, for the most part, still functions. Aaah, I would have liked to see this world extended as a multi-chapter or perhaps, drabble!shots.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Please continue the story
| MushuFireLorde chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
That's sweet...er...something like that. I like it a lot! It should have more reviews!
| Exemia chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
I absolutely loved this story! :D I've been meaning to make a HTF comic, do you mind if I made a doujinshi version of this? I'll give all plot credit to you. :)
| xXxVampire-HimexXx chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Pleeeease! You have to freakin' continue! Don't leave us hanging!
. . .
Although, I have to agree, This does remind me of Warm Bodies too.
*Sighs* But anyway, This is soooo going on my favs! Nice One-Shot!
| SoniKZooM chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
This reminds me of Warm Bodies for some reason. I know why but I haven't even seen the movie yet! 030
AWESOME CHARACTERS, AWESOME PLOT, AWESOME DETAILS, AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME!
| Baka No Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
You need to make another :o It was so entertaining
| Creepy Nightlight chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I need to read more! x.x :D
| Mika-chii chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Make more chapters!
You just gotta continue this!
You're really leaving us hanging! D:
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2013