|Reviews for A Way We Go|
| Preciossa chapter 10 . 3/10
Update soon, please! I love this fic! :D :D :D
| KatieMarrie chapter 31 . 3/9
What a beautiful story. Thank you.
| givemefoodplease chapter 1 . 3/8
OK, first of all
HOW DARE YOU DESTROY ALL OF MY EMOTIONS LIKE THAT?!
That was a very cruel thing to do. I love how tortured Loki is in this story- even about his appearance (Even though we all know that both him and Tom Hiddleston are sex gods).
THANK YOU FOR DESTROYING ALL OF MY EMOTIONS LIKE THAT!
This is one of the most well developed story, in terms of writing skill and character development, I have read here for a good while. I request more insecure-about-appearance-Loki and insecure-about-strength-Loki in the future! Also, more LOKI RAGE!
Very much looking forward to the next update!
| wrathkitty chapter 31 . 3/5
OK, first, I totally snarfed into my tea when I read the "Just kiss already" line, and can completely see the expression on Loki's face when Thor starts laughing (i.e., the expression he wears when he's just shown up at SHIELD, and Dr. Selvig says, "Brother of Thor?" Yeah, you know the one I'm talking about. THAT expression).
I do worry that Loki has put Jane up on too high of a pedestal. He seems to view her as this unearthly, perfect creature, but she's obviously just as fallible as anyone else. So how will he react when she inevitably missteps or does something that Loki misinterprets as egregious? Especially if they enter into a romantic relationship, which is where they seem to be heading?
As I said before in a PM to wbss21, Loki's pervasive melancholy throughout this story gets me every time, and makes me even more worried for him now that he's starting to pull out of it. Up until now he's just been existing from moment to moment (each of which have been heartbreaking at best), and now that Jane has indicated to him she returns his feelings, he is starting to feel the sunshine at last. Which makes me wonder when the storm clouds (no Thor-ish puns intended) are going to rear their ugly cumulonimbus heads again.
Loki in this fic reminds me very much of one of my former elementary students. He had an extremely rough start in kindergarten, was pigeonholed as a bad kid, and ultimately ended up trapped by others' negative expectations even after he started receiving help. When he tried to make positive changes, people made such a big deal out of it that it made him uncomfortable, and he'd zip right back into his comfort zone of bad choices. Loki's been developing his bad-choice comfort zone for centuries. Will Jane be able to recognize self-sabotaging for what it is and have the patience to stay the course, or is this relationship doomed from the start? She clearly seems to realize the importance of treading lightly, but she can't walk on eggshells all the time.
Aaand, speaking of doom...can I just say that Dr. Doom in this fic is the epitome of creepy? The scene where they find Loki, and the state in which they find him, still makes me shudder. Eeeps.
Seriously can't wait for Chapter 32, and to see how Loki reacts now that they no longer have an audience (other than Thor, of course, who I think will kick back on the motel bed and ask Loki to conjure him up a bowl of popcorn to snack on while he watches the fallout).
| Annienygma chapter 31 . 3/1
What a lovely story! I stayed up until 8 this morning reading this after I stumbled upon your tale. I finally dozed off but immediately started reading again once I awakened. I literally could not put it down. Thank you for sharing this.
I must confess, I liked your version much better than the movie, especially what happened after. This is my favorite Lokane story ever!
| Shadow of Loki chapter 31 . 2/26
Update soon, please! I love this fic! :D It's the best I've read in the world of the fics! I love this and this couple! :D You're a great writer and I love the way you write! :D
| rioludoodle chapter 31 . 2/22
Oh, this is brilliant! LOL! XD "Just kiss already!" I love that bit, a random person shouting that line was just perfect for the moment. :D Brilliant! I'm not a shipping fanatic, and I detest most pairings, but even I have to admit that this story's Loki/Jane ship is amazingly well done. Great job!
| Takada Saiko chapter 29 . 2/18
You know... I don't ship these two except in your story. I never make exceptions on ship... except in your story. Well done.
| VividInk chapter 30 . 2/11
Kudos to you for this absolutely amazing story! The depth with which you have explored and built Loki's character upon, the flashbacks to his childhood; his relationship with Frigga; is pure GOLD. There is such a natural realism about this that I love as you don't hide the gore or the pain, it's all just laid out for us to see, and it all adds to the brilliance of this story. I particularly enjoyed this last chapter with Jane's frantic behaviour in trying to convince Loki she is sincere, kind of digging herself out of the hole she's in after saying the wrong things, and my oh my, don't we all find ourselves in such situations when we're panicked. And they finally kissed! Woohoo! Now please update, because I really want to see the progression of Loki and Jane's relationship from here. I'm sure you will do it as much justice as you have with the rest of this fic. Well done!
| GoodForBad chapter 31 . 2/5
Finally! Some nice feels, instead of horror feels, which when Loki is concerned are really just as good, but - I think you get my meaning. Loved this chapter - so very sweet. I love that you make Jane understand, which makes perfect sense in all of this - gaw, he needs her love. Maybe he doesn't fully realize it yet. This was wonderful.
| GoodForBad chapter 30 . 2/5
Oh my god.
His loyalty is so undying in the face of ALL the crap that's been committed against him, that I can barely handle it. It actually HURTS. After a lifetime of rejection and mocking and pure, raw PAIN, he still sees Jane as Thor's and he doesn't want to do anything behind his back.
That's powerful stuff.
You are brilliant in your work. This is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL work, and while I've never been a fan of the Jane/Loki pairing, the way you've portrayed everything in this universe - how could she NOT fall for him? It's completely wonderful and realistic. Lovely. In every way.
| AndShadowsWatchingOverMe chapter 1 . 2/2
Thank you for a good and strong fic. It's really a pleasure to read this. I especially like your portrayal of Loki, it's so different from other fics and yet I find it easy to believe. Keep up the good work!
| GoodForBad chapter 13 . 1/31
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
This was a powerful chapter that I'm reviewing far too long after the fact but STILL. Deep. Very deep. I can't, I just, no. Can't fathom how remarkable this really is. Perfection.
| darthxerik chapter 31 . 1/30
All I can say is that this chapter was as the others have been... the feels abound and it's a given that your character portrayals are spot-on and intriguing! But I SO giggled on the "JUST KISS ALREADY!" haha! I was begging some kind of reaction from the crowd so it fit perfectly. XD Can't wait for the next chapter!
| kakashidiot chapter 31 . 1/27
HAHAHAHA! My favourite part was when someone yelled out "JUST KISS ALREADY". Maybe it was Coulson in disguise. LOL. Anyways.
I liked how we see how messed up Loki is inside and how uncertain and prideful (and NOT perfect) but how he and Jane help each other. I think it's awesome how Thor is really on their side as well - and how Jane and Thor can be those influences for Loki when he goes overboard. (because we know he does, Lord love him)
I guess what we are all waiting for now is how this is all going to culminate Kyeheheheh. XD What's SHIELD going to think, blah blah blah. Hahaha. But it's great to see the two finally coming together. Lokane is so hard to get going, but when it does, I think it's such an interesting pair. We need more Lokane in our lives.
Thanks for sharing