Reviews for Kano and Sonya's rivalry
Guest chapter 4 . 11/27/2014
NeedsANewPenname chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
You know, I'd like to leave a proper review, I really would..however...

Please, for the love of all that's holy..learn to use proper punctuation in your fanfics. Seriously, you have as one whole long sentence what should be a paragraph of four or five sentences.

I know fanfics are supposed to be writen for enjoyment, but trust me, it will be a lot easier and enjoyable to read your fanfic if you just learn to write with proper punctuation.

Right now it reads like someone's reading it all in one breath.