|Reviews for Children|
| CRaZYLoVE71 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
This is the kind of thing the world needs to hear. That God isn't someone you can just ask from. We need to trust Him fully. Great! Now we need to ask Him how to tell the world this Truth. I'm serious, you know!
| themockingjaypin chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
i was shocked at this part: "And when you have a question, turn not first to your friend"
always turn to God! :D
what a lesson.. :)
God bless... :3
| Shadow40000 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I LOVED IT! :D
its so amazing.. touching .. but most of all True..
we always say we trust God..
but when the going gets tough.. we start doubting..
you placed it so wonderfully! :D
you mind if i try makin a song out of this beautiful poem? .