Reviews for This Is Prim
ithinkilikecaden chapter 6 . 9/18/2013
I chose to read this fanfic mostly because it was based on the song Stan. Damn that song is just brilliant. Anyways it was amazing. I could pick out some parts that are almost exactly like the song but worded differently. Great job

Check out the song "Superman" by Eminem that's my favourite song
stick-at-nought shady chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
Sabrina Mellark chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
I like this sorry a lot and I'm thinking of writing a stripey about a girl from a district, I just don't know which one yet
shady66730 chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
That was great. ohmehgerd Prim is like my new favorite bad guy.
You know what you should do? Go on Google and look up Eminem Stan The Lost Verses. In an interview on Shade 45 Em said he originally wrote three more verses, one where Stan comes back from the grave (he didn't really die in the first place) and tried to kill him, and Em shoots him in self defense but doesn't kill him. Stan goes to the hospital and then when he's released goes after Em again and this time Em blows his brains out with the gun. You should make a new story or just continue this one based on that idea. :D That'd be epic.
shady66730 chapter 5 . 6/14/2013
Uh. Well, a brilliant ending, but utterly terrifying. o.o Who shoots their own sister? Anyway, have fun on your vacation and good chapter. I can't wait for Katniss' response in the next. :D
stick-at-nought shady chapter 5 . 6/14/2013
this chapter was sad! ahh!
shady66730 chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
Man, now Prim is my favorite villain! :D You're telling her story well. I can't wait to see what you do.
stick-at-nought shady chapter 4 . 6/12/2013
UPDATE SOON! damn now i feel like a hypocrite. or however you spell that. Eminem is amazing! Good story!
stick-at-nought shady chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
good chapter! can't wait to hear how she kills herself. wow i feel like a gamemaker...
shady66730 chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
... at this point I'm kind of scared. But, anyway, still love it. More soon would be epic. :D Meanwhile, I feel like Prim, except not all murderous and stuff. I haven't slept in days, I haven't eaten in hours, and I am, of coursed, obsessed. I'm starting to think I need to go to Camp Recovery -shoves Anarchy Girl-. Anyway, great job. Prim is really sounding like Stan but it's all the more better because she's a girl so she's more relatable. Hey, and if you and AG (I'm too lazy to put her whole name. The person listed up there ) want to make a second character on my SYOT, that'd be good, because I really want to start it. I started writing the District 1 reaping and stuff already because I'm so impatient. ;p Haha, so yeah. More This Is Prim! :D
stick-at-nought shady chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
good chapter, but some of the lyrics were like knockoff lyrics, they sounded like in the song stan. duh, she's going to die.
shady66730 chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
I felt guilty for not reviewing, so I did this time. With the first chapter I thought this would kind of be a flop (no offense) but with this chapter I really liked. Keep this up; I love the concept. And I can see the references of Stan. Like she does the morphling to be like Katniss and Stan cut himself. And I see where it's going. I wonder how she'll do it and who she'll have with her, because Stan had his girlfriend in the trunk and drove off a bridge. I wonder how Prim'll do it.
Sabrina Mellark chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
I liked this chapter. I personally prefer first person POV but its still amazing. Ill make surw ro check out eminems song stan. Oh! A.d please remember to update
stick-at-nought shady chapter 1 . 6/5/2013