Reviews for Falling Frost
jackandelsaforever101 chapter 13 . 7/28
You made me cry...
FrostwhiteStorm1614 chapter 1 . 4/3
that wasent teasing that was downright insulting
Erithebear chapter 15 . 4/3
This is an amazing story. A beautiful moral as well. The gift of innocence has been taken away far too often and early in this world. I truly love the story and the ending was gorgeous. If there is one thing I have learned in my life it's that we are never alone even when we think we are.

Loved ones will never leave your side even after passing. Some even become Guardians of their loved ones. I know it because I can feel them everyday. It is strange. One in particular, shows he is there when I smell birthday candles. It was always my favorite smell. He passed on my birthday 5 years and 1 minute after I was born. I barely knew him but I always felt a strong love towards him. I have about two memories of him but they were the happiest of my early life. The smell pops up even without candles having burned in that area. During my father's passing, it filled a car I was in and everyone noticed. It was always my favorite smell and always will be. It isn't much comfort, I know that, but if you ever smell something familiar, hear a familiar sound, see a familiar sight and think of them, that is their way of saying "I am here and always will be as long as you need me and if you call." No body truly knows the life afterwards, but this is what I hope, this is what I believe, what I know to be true and I hope, with all my heart, that your beloved friend has found the sweetest peace. He will be there dear. That cool breeze on your shoulder could be a positive sign.

Thank you for this amazing story. I wish ya happiness and I hope you take up a career in writing. It seems like a talent you have and is truly amazing.
xxx chapter 15 . 2/12
I really love this fanfic..awesome
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 15 . 1/16
I reread this story because it's so beautiful and I think this fanic has the best moral story and message behind it than any fanfic i've ever read and my eyes are hurting because it's so emotional and beautiful and sort of a life lesson and I just love this story even though it's not the happiest
Whisper Fox chapter 15 . 1/6
That was absolutely beautiful, thank you so much for righting this master piece it's helped lift my spirit so much and gave me a new found hope. Also thank for sharing your store with every single one of us, it takes a great person to right something that can touch the heart and soul like you did so for the story you wrote and your life story you told thank you and i can't wait to read the rest of your works. Sincerely, Whisper Fox.
roonialwazlib29 chapter 12 . 9/4/2015
Said in the words of mikassa Ackerman herself. Well done my friend.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/11/2015
Oh. Oh. My friend, this is so moving, so brilliantly heartbreaking. And the way you ended it, with the flower on the cliff...so true. Hope blossoms where nothing else can. What a beautiful story. Thank you.
TheWhisperingWind222 chapter 15 . 7/23/2015
This was a really good story and I loved it! I loved that you put life lessons and morals behind all of your chapters, it made them really good! I'm sure your friend was an amazing person and I'm sorry he died, but life has a funny way of teaching us things, doesn't it? I hope you write many more amazing story just like this one, and I look forward to reading them.
crazyperson88 chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
This chapter is so flipping amazing
Zyenna chapter 15 . 5/11/2015
This is beautiful... I loved the memorial at the end. Life is best when loved to the fullest, of that I surly agree...
Cris32323 chapter 15 . 5/6/2015
This is a truly lovely story! It made the rest of my day wonderful and positive. I think my favorite part of this story was your author notes at the end that harmonized with each chapter. This story made me so happy and so sad at the same time. The way you described specific things was very original and enlightening. I would work on your dialogue a little bit and make sure you make North's and the Easters Bunnies accents consistent. So, um... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUcH AN AWESOME STORY !
AppleSpongeCake chapter 15 . 4/15/2015
I hate you. I truly do. I've read a chapter, paused to cry my eyes out, and read the nxt one. This story is a touching one, filled with words that show me life is not just scars and pain. Life is beautiful. I have only bestowed these five words (not that they are something everyone would want, like a grammy or something) on two other people. I will never forget this story aslong as I live. Thank you.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 5 . 3/14/2015
I like how you explained it. I thought his fall into dispair was a bit too quick, but with Pitch thrown into the mix it makes more sense.
Zorra Reed chapter 15 . 12/4/2014
I personally would have loved to see more of Jacks recovery prior to the scene in the last chapter; however, since this story focused on hope I think it was a fitting jump and way to end the story. I'm curious though about what's happened to Pitch, he's one of my fav character and I think a story following him after this incident would be amazing. The part I loved the most was when Jack lit up like a moonbeam inside his cave, the description was fantastic and inspiring. I can't wait to start writing! (Okay, well to be honest, I really liked the part after when Jack doubled over from over exertion. I've got a thing for angst and torment, and would really have loved it if you'd done more with that moment.) Overall, the story could use a beta and quick edit but the mistakes didn't take away from the beauty. I want to thank you for using the last few chapters of this story to share something personal and close to your heart. It means a lot when an author is willing to be vulnerable in their writing. It means even more that you do it so boldly and came out the better for it. I hope your heart can heal quickly from your loss and that you'll always remember how important it is to live for the moment, joy or sorrow, as you've stated here in your closing authors note. I've enjoyed reading your fanfiction so far, both for Rise of the Guardians and Maleficent, I hope to read more in the near future, the longer the better, but your oneshots are great! God Bless.
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