Reviews for God of Hollows
Guest chapter 6 . 2/4
Interesting story please continue it
Guest chapter 6 . 12/10/2016
There is nothing Smart about this Fiction

It is Half Baked..

Shallow Writing of Women

Formula full of Cliches

Too Many OC..keep it a Bleach x Naruto Crossover.

There Should only be Few Vasto Lordes.. No more then 10.

Naruto being Overpowered.. Why is he Most powerful!?. A Dark and Evil Protagonist does not
make a good Story Espicially if this Naruto is simply A Self Insert with Your Fantsies using his Name.. I have seen the Same over and Over again in many other Naruto or Naruto Crossovers.

Bad Writing and poor Handling of Rape.. What was the point of that?

Ooc for Your Naruto. would it be beneath to acually Force himself on Woman., would he be too prideful to force himself in a Woman.

A Better Writing if Naruto acually Seduced Kenpachi Yarchi into having Sex with after Conversation.. But their Affair only made her ashamed of herself for being Defeated and Seduced by Naruto but Regrets Nothing. Despite them Lusting for One another.

Think of their Relationship similar to Raizen and the Female Doctor from Yu Yu Hakusho.. But their Complicated Relationship is still Ongoing.

Their affair results in a Hybrid Child

Lack of updates.. How long has been since you updated this Story?

In this Story of you intend to have to be The God Of Hollows.. Then you need to absolute with your Title.. And Some Hollows that know Naruto is the First Hollow.. .. Where should Naruto Kingdom be.. Is he intrested in the affairs of Hollows.. His Motives? Does He seek to Make Hollows Civilised beings and avoid eating Humans?.. Does he want to make a Nation and Rehabilitate Hollows and make them Civil?

No Harems.. Just Casual Sex.. Sex with no strings attached.. When he had sex with The First Kenpachi he felt Complete and Somewhat enlightened... When he have sex with others it is Mostly Lust and Sometimes affection depending on who that Woman is

This Encounter with Naruto changes Much plot.. She still Becomes Retsu In Omaha through encountering Kenpachi.. But she will Keep Training and improving herself hoping to Fight Naruto again..

So her Power level would be Reconned., Behind The Head Captain Commander.. She is Second Strongest Most Powerful Soul Reaper,.. She is one of few Characters Aizen is Weary of.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/17/2016
This story is so awsome should've continued it
Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2016
dude, you write such a good story, and then you just go and abandon it? at least put it up for adoption, man.
jharrell819 chapter 6 . 7/14/2016
6. I do believe that he would eventually gather a harem. It is said that Women flock to power whither that is true i don't know but i do believe so.
Oddballzebra chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
You needlessly use too many big words, to the point where its kind of annoying.
What's it to yah chapter 6 . 3/25/2016
Dudes, you have to update this fic. it's difficult to find a good dark Naruto fic, so please man update.
radeklegia chapter 6 . 3/7/2016
oh shit Kisuke is a clone of Naruto isn't he? :D
radeklegia chapter 4 . 3/6/2016
Naruto is the Juubi isn't he?
Guest chapter 6 . 3/3/2016
In my opinion this is silly.. And you as one of many Follow the Dumb Naruto Clithes

Harem

Dark Evil Naruto that is one dimensional

Poor potrayal of Female characters

Poor plot

Stupid and silly oc's

Naruto overpowered in the beginning

Honestly this story needs to rewritten in my opnion
tgms177 chapter 6 . 1/19/2016
great stuff and once again i vote for the harem
tgms177 chapter 3 . 1/19/2016
i really like where this going - c'mon #9 harem hands down
Guest chapter 6 . 1/6/2016
Mmmmmmmmore chapters please
Randoh chapter 5 . 12/29/2015
5 chapters and a couple of years in... and you are still on the second sentence of your summary. Either this is a not so clever bait and switch... or this first act is really really really slow.
curtis mcfadden chapter 3 . 12/19/2015
your story is awsome make more please
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