|Reviews for your name is the splinter inside me|
| wickeddominatrix chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
I SDUITAUIFGFUGKJF OPD PDJKFG ok this was so amazing! you really made me ship them that much harder so thanks a lot. this was well written and i cant recover. please write more! :)
| Woodrokiro chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Oh god this fic hurts in all the right ways. Beautiful job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
This is just lovely. I love Will and Alana. So well writen, and so well captured. Thanks for this :-)
| Tadpole24 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
This was incredible. So in character and well written. I truly loved reading every second of it!
| Beaufale chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
| Autumn Rayne chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Nicely done! I love the way you have mixed Alana's vulnerability and strength. "Will crosses the space between them, movements slow and deliberate, all careful, precarious control." - great line, I can very much mentally see this picture. I also liked the idea of Will pressing his hand against the door to keep Alana from leaving, an action I think is very much in character for him. And, of course, I liked the smooches.