|Reviews for The States That Fall Into The Sea|
| TunelessLyric chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
The geography analogy was perfect for this fic, especially the earthquake one near the end. It was a really unique way of describing the tension between Carolina and Tex, too.
A little variety in speech tags would be nice to see. There were a lot of them before any speaking and very few afterwards. I also noticed they were all "said" though they could have been "whispered" or "sighed". Just a thought.
I thought the portrayal of Wash was spot on. The way it flowed made me feel like I missed an episode of the series.