Reviews for With Nothing Else |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the drama and angst possibilities of this story. Did you get my PM? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy this story, and hope you keep updating it. |
![]() ![]() wow what a good chapter, i enjoyed the sex scene the best and after that i also liked the scene with ritsuko poor she keeps fucking up in front of shinji, i wonder what asuka is going to do i feel like she thinks she is getting left behind by rei a nd shinji and i dont mean on the synch tests, looking forward to the next chapter i felt that this chapter was setting the mood for the next one hope it's quite shocking, like always take your time bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alcohol and women is a disaster waiting to happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter, maybe its my biased talking, but I want to see Ayanami as being unable to express well, which is partially true so my bias is abated, and that Shinji doesn't just bend over backwards for anyone. You know except for Ayanami because of...Kama Sutra reasons. I love that Kensuke got what was coming to him. And if I had to be honest, I saw it coming a mile away. Just from the fact that Kensuke didn't see her in a romantic light pretty much affirmed it for me that Chidori had it out for him. Touji going about making assumptions pretty much sealed the deal for me. I can be quite genre savvy when I'm into /maybe even not into a story. Continue onwards |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe she just aborted! Great chapter and anxious to read more. Less Kaji and other male cast member scenes please. The non-OC females are way more interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well on Ritsuko your rather guilty yourself of torturing her I would say. Fun chapter, but its got some shadows of trouble on the horizon. Shinji and Rei really need to deal with that posessive jelousy and poor Ritsuko... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're one of the most consistant authors with your updates, so I was begining to get worried there. If Shinji is going to be tempted and cheat, i'd rather him do it with Misato. Him doing it with Asuka would seem predictable and kind of boring. Rei is interesting to read in this, she's the possesive and dominant one in their relationship but she seems to care about Shinji. It's hard to tell if she's a total Yandere or just likes the feeling sex brings. If there is a break between Shinji and Rei, I can see Rei going Yandere and killing all the girls, or Rei going out and screwing everybody (classmates, Makoto, Aoba, Kaji but not Gendo) to fill the void. Thanks for updating this and hope to see it updated again soon. |
![]() ![]() loved it, amazing, just great.- i am really enjoying this story, its nice and simple, yet it feels far too big and more complicated than it seems. i took a long time to read and re-read this chapter.- the only part i glanced through was the hospital thing but everything else was over the top; i loved tha fact that ritsuko while being so smart is so stupid when she thinks about gendou, for ex how she delded herself into thingkin that gendou felt bad about the abort, or how besides being so smart she was so stupid as to let herself become pregnant, on a personal note i think that the most smart people can sometimes the most simple to delude.- i agree with you ritsuko is my top three characters i like her more than misato, well i am just rambling here, like always good chapter and lookin g forward to mor it's so good, as always take your time it is worth |
![]() ![]() I like how Rei has a Yandere quality to her. It's interesting to read about Rei's veiw on sex, but given that she doesn't seem to have any modesty, I tend to lean towards her thinking that it's not sacred and special but more ' it feels good so i'll do it'. Thanks for updating this story and i'm looking forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() I hope that you get your money back from that jerk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another fun chapter, but I am still awaiting Maya's chance for happiness. She really does deserve it. The Rei relationship continues to be entertaining and I'm actually quite surprised that they didn't force Asuka to move in with her just to cut down on the hanky panky. |
![]() ![]() cool really nice chapter so far this sunday has been very shitty but your new chapter really made my day it was really nice i enjoyed it a lot thank you so much for this looking forward to the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well worth the wait! Glad to read Shinji didn't two-time Rei when Asuka offered. Also appreciated the toned down jealousy of Rei... No death threats or actual violence this chapter. Looking forward for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice slice-of-life. Well written with a fun, mature plot! Shinji and Rei pre-Asuka is always a treat. Looking forward to reading the other chapters! |