Reviews for With Nothing Else
Orlean chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
I really liked this chapter, I'm looking forward to what happens when Asuka shows up.

So, for your Eva/Sailor Moon idea, do you intend for Shinji to actually be one of the Sailor Stars or or nor of the other senshi? Personally I'm split between Sailor Mars And Sailor Jupitor.
miguelangel chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
liked it, it was okay looking forward to asuka keep up with the good work
dennisud chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
Like what you done so far. Wondering when the hammer will fall either from Gendo who would see it as against his plans, or the 2nd child as she would see it as some sort of competition!
Pleas NO mari and lets see where this goes!
Darksnider05 chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
I am enjoying this and Rei is such a fun character to read about.
Neferius chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Hmm, not bad so far. Seems like your usual type of story so far, which is far from a bad thing.
I look forward to seeing how it develops.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Okay why do you have two profiles?


Why aren't you working on the Wandering Pilot?


How come this profile isn't a for kids one?
qwertyui chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Loved it, the story seems to have a nice balance between realistic drama and waff also ecchi potential.
I always find it entertaining reading about how Rei's strange personality would act when she's pursueing romance.

I may be just my imagination, but this style of writing seems different to your fic DUE TO CHANCE. I prefer the style you used in this story, it seems to have a smoother flow, where as 'Due To Chance's style seemed a bit forced.
plop chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
A new story already with a long first chapter too. You da man! Zentrodie.
miguelangel chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
slow pace, great characters development, taking things slowly, i really like that about your work, i enjoyed it alot it was quite long so it took me a few days to read i had to come back to it but even though it still was entertaining and enjoyable, looking forward to the next chapter
Bob chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
superior story, as usual. Excellent.
Donderkind chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Good... Very good. The pacing is perfect and the story has all of the insight and interpersonal interplay that you always do so very well.
The build up of the relationship is very well done and I have to admit, pretty damn cute!

I am looking forward to more of this great story!
WriteShop chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Another great story.

I like now you are writing Shinji - He's angsty, but not annoyingly so
and rei is needy, without being pathetic.

Ritsuko IS patheticly needy, but that works :)
kazikamikaze24 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
A cute little story so far that I do hope to read more of quite soon. There aren't any problems with the pace, sentence structure, or overall descriptive details, so all I can say is, until next time, stay golden!
zzzz chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
i liked the story, please keep up the good work. i cant wait for the next chapter!
dennisud chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Your not putting a pairing her yet, so I think you'll be building on these 'little things' Shinji will do with the other pilots. You've also put the Sperm sample out there to be done when, how and by whom?

Good start! Been wanting to read a good Eva story. Too many lately were far out there with their plots and actions, and that says alot given this IS Evangelion!

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