That last line was a fresh feeling end

Another one of your great stories has come to an end, I thought the ending was great and cannot wait to see what your next story is.

This ended on a higher note than I anticipated, I was fully prepared for this long ride to hell to end in the belly of the beast, but the final juncture brought me back to salvation. Good run and good read, I await your next work.

ah, mixed feelings, I haven't been happy with the direction you went with this after killing Rei off the first time, but I'm sad to see it over too. You did some nice work on this one.

While I doubt you'd want to do a sequel, have you considered some of the uses of Eva technology in space travel? There are other progenitors out there after all.

somehow... the ending feels...a bit of a letdown...
the battle was shortish, the commander and subcommander lost without a real fight, and the after final battle at NERV part was too much telling what happened, and not enough showing what happened.

it feels like an average epilogue for a good fic, IMHO.

I don't comment often anymore, but I felt I should before you finish this up.
As always you've done a great job with making one of your stories entertaining and interesting to read.
Lilith turned out how i figured she would, though Instrumentality was averted a bit differently the predicted. It makes sense for an all powerful being to see time differently and that she's willing to wait.
I can't wait to see how you end this!

Awesome as ever. Can't wait for the finish.

Thanks for this story. It's sad to see it ending but i'm interested to see what story idea you'll do next.

Oh boy... I was hesitant to read\review this because, well, world probably ending...

-THERE ARE SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW-

-sir, is their anyway of getting - in this case it's 'there': "is there anyway of"

-she's just to weak - I was wondering when you'd miss a 'to' for 'too' again: "she's just too weak"

-souls existed and he did now that - I think you meant "souls existed and he did know that"

-Just those three. And the 'to' and 'too' mistaking was also down to only one. Good work!

wow Shinji went to a therapist... I don't think I need to say more...

And now he's visiting Asuka. Wait is he going to...? Oh god he is?! Oh, no he did not. Phew. Don't scare me like that.

Come on Shinji you gotta over come this... We need you to have hope! Maya-chan just proposed to you dude!

Oh man Shinji is so going to destroy the world isn't he?

Damn, Rei 4 is coming up, straight from the core of Unit 02's dummy plug... well played, Gendo! GASP! His good play didn't matter! The third showed up before the fourth and completely owned him! Holy shit what the hell is gonna happen?! Gonna keep reading. Nice torturing of the bastard king by the way, I don't think I've ever read Gendo's entire hand being ripped out.

Ah, Maya staying with old collage buddies? Good way to counter all the dark stuff with Gendo. But go back to Tokyo 3 already! This bit is long! Ah there it is, Maya sees the news!

Holy-! Did Lilith just made an instanteneous third Impact just to have a private talk with her boyfriend?! No wait, it's just a private space... still nervous as to how this goes...

Ah and now we've had our near instrumentality and had it averted. And that's exactly what you said in your notes, lol. Pheww, that was close. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time...

So NOW the next chapter is the last? Oh man I so wanna see it...

nice

Zen, I honestly wouldn't mind some straight up Asushin from you, like really, I haven't really seen any from you since your old MST's, I still miss those by the way, like a lot.

Gendo deserves a good beating scratch that not just a beating but a savage beating to for all he did to Ritsuko and Shinji !

...Please let this gave a happy ending.

Before reading, can i ask whats the main relationship in this story? Is it shinji/rei or kawoshin?

It's rare I review, generally preferring to lurk more than anything but well, I guess I'm breaking a habit.

This is some good work here, yes there are spelling mistakes, words mixed up with other words which sound the same but aren't the same and misused words but it's easily ignorable because the stories are always a roller-coaster from start to end.

Hell, you even managed to get a Rei/Shinji shipper questioning their relationship by the end and I'm interested to see where this goes now. If Rei II is back in some format, or if Rei III remembers enough to essentially be the same person and if they've merged with Lillith (Which reminds me of your Orders story in some regards, I wonder if this is a path not taken, with Rei II giving into Lillith rather than fighting her at the end).

In short, can't wait to see where this goes as well as your other stories. Keep it up man/woman/human being, this is some fine work. And I bet there are plenty of people who are reading and not reviewing just like me.

Also, if you are worried about your Mercaba stories getting nuked, why not try AO3 which has a much more liberal policy regarding such things?