|Reviews for the moon guides you home|
| dimitrisgirl18 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I really loved your moon/wolf metaphors and references, because they're absolutely beautiful and describe lunalav really well. This whole freeverse read like a very intricate, twining story, and it felt like a story that I would read again and again. It made me really happy inside and that's an awesome thing for it to do. I love all of your references to her not exactly being a werewolf and how that shouldn't exist but then Luna teaches her to love herself and that it's okay and eeeeek Lunalav :3 Beautiful.
| inkteardrops chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
oh my god. joey. i hate you.
(no i love you really i do but you just tore my heart apart so please stop being so perfect)
"and Lavender slowly finds her home / in the heartbeat of the moon" - bby, are you trying to kill me because that jline just really broke my heart and this whole fic was flawless and the /pairing/, lord, the pairing, joey, this was flawless and i'm sorry for this short review and the fact that it makes zero sense but i'm just going to blame it on the flawless nature of yourself.
| ProfessorSquirrell chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
(a made up creature)"
you are perfect.
i love you.
| Palefur chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Oooooooh, aaaaaaah . The mooooooon. With the moon you will always find your way home? I'm sorry do you mean Polaris? I mean what if there is no moon? Or 5% of a moon, crescent (really small crescent)? Or negative 5%? Wait, what? Nevermind. I like the fact tha FrEeVeRsE
no Mhm... yeah like that. That was totally not intentional * cough cough *. You mean unintentional? Shut up, can't you see I am reviewing? I am a figment of you imagination, I cannot see anything. Oh. Well then, I don't like figs... Anyway as I was saying, it was a good freeverse. This is like your 3rd right? Perfect job, Dobbs. Did you notice all the extended voweeeeeeels were 7 letters long? Anyway like the whole moon/wolf thing. Very nice. :D
| saltzmans chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
joey, this was /gorgeous/
i have been dipping in the amount of femmslash i have been reading lately but this just made me want to read lots more gah!
the references to lavender, the wolf being pulled by luna, the moon were so imagery and vivid. i particularly liked the line [ a-not-quite-almost-dead-barely-alive-wolf-girl ] because i think it is a gorgeous description for lavender unf
ANYWAY WRITE MORE FREEVERSES KAY
| Someone aka Me chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
You write freeverse the way I write freeverse — minimalist. It's not overstylised — mostly parentheses and italics and the line breaks that dictate flow. This is exactly the type of freeverse I love &hearts
This line; "she still dreams too big" is perfect for Luna oh yes.
The bit about scars, one or two or three or a hundred, that was gorgeous
and the whole thing is beautiful.
I know you fought with it, but let me tell you this: you won. Fab job, darling.
| slightlysmall chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Joanna, you're amazing. Playing on the wolf/moon thing with Luna's name was ingenius, and it reminds me of Charlie/Draco because of it. It's so great. I loved all the bits about scars, and how Lavender isn't sure who or what she is or if she'd be better off not being. That line was amazing. And the not-quite-werewolf finding her place with the metaphorical moon was PERFECTION.