Reviews for Family Comes First
Alana chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Love the story and how the story that Snow starts to say is the very beginning.
Lacorra chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
LOVED IT
QuillAnnie chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I loved this this is just emotional but i love it so much!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
This was amazing, loved the bonding between Emma and her Dad, and needing her Mum was lovely.
AlisonandEmilyLOVE chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
WOW AMAZING! yours is SO MUCH BETTER then my story of how I wanted Emma to find out...AMAZING JOB!
ElleMZ chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I love the interactions between Emma and her dad, so sweet!
Isabella Poulous chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Cute and fluffy. Could use some work on character wordings. But the holding and movements were very good. Not overly descriptive and yet, just enough. Keep up the good work and continue evolving with your writing.