|Reviews for Stay in the Light|
| Starcatcher95 chapter 4 . 3/27
Hello! So, I just finished reading "Staying in the Light," and I must say, it was a wonderful story! You portrayed Sam and Dean perfectly, and the story was superb! It was funny, when I started reading this, I thought about the story with the "White-Eyed Miners." So, it was quite a surprise to find out that they were actually the "supernatural" in this story.
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| firstcatfish chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
The Honeybun cracks made an awesome ending. I also really liked Miss Gwyn. Great job with the story, as always.
| Meliphyre chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
I really enjoyed that! Love whumped up Sammy that ends up in the hospital. I also enjoyed it for the lore of the White eyed Freaks. Brilliantly told. I'm in West Tennessee. Mining was not covered in TN history apparently so it was interesting to have a tale of my state. (My ultimate goal in live though is to end up in East TN!)
| Shazza chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
I really lOved this story, it had a different kind of pacing to it. You provided a very rich and textured feeling for what it would be like down in the mines. I love Sam and Deans relationship in this fic, noy all edgy and angry, more just brothers. My favorite part however was the treatment of the three ghosts who were really saved in the end. I loved that!
| Spirit Burner AKA Chick Feed chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
Excellent, truly excellent my friend. You have such a mature style of writing. Also, were you a miner in a past life? Where did all the detail come from? All in all, this story is AWESOME! It's written well, it flows well, it has the necessary beginning, middle and end. Really good job, it feel as if you really enjoyed writing it; I certainly enjoyed reading it.
| Ginnylove9990 chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
Man I have missed your stories. I loved the why you find these true story and put them into your supernatural story. I love this story and The Miner's Prayer at the end. I hope to see a lot more of your story soon. But until the next new I going to read all the old ones I liked. I hope hear from you soon.
| Soncnica chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
Both my grandpa's were miners, so this story made me really really sad and made me think of what if something like this happened to them.. ya know? But at the same time I understand the whole friendship between miners thing... its powerful and strong yet war is stil stronger! *sigh*
I liked Gwyn .. such an adorable old lady! :-)
And honeybuns ... ahahhahahhaha... the jokes you can make with that :-) lol and you did, awesome! :-)
Really a great casefic, I enjoyed reading it a lot!
| apieceofcake chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
It's always a treat to read a new story from you! I love reading your stories and I loved this one too :-)
Thank you muchly! xx.
| em-marsh chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
I have recently finished reading all your stories.
Thank you so much, they were all wonderful.
Hurt/comfort is my absolute favourite genre, so to stumble upon your collection was like finding a treasure trove of goodness.
Thank you so much, please continue to write. I have read published novels which pale in comparison to your work.
If you have any other stories on please favourite them so that we (our collective fanbase) can find them. h/c supernatural is my heroin.
Thanks again, fantastic work.
| zuimar chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
What a great story, I absolutely love it! Great characters, Miss Gwyn, Gus, Donna even the miners, all of them are so well written. Really horrible way to die like those miners did. Loved the way the ghosts were 'taken care off', not a normal salt and burn but the ghosts realizing that Dean came back for Sam and didn't leave him behind like they were left behind. Great job again, as always! I hope to see a new story soon again.
| Nana56 chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
What a terrific story and how wonderful it is to read something of yours again! Welcome back!
I'm really looking forward to reading the one you're working on, too. Glad the muse is cooperating.
| pandora jazz chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
It was great to read your story again. I loved reading it in "Blood Brothers". I hope I remembered to thank you last year.
Great story/mystery, wonderful tense scenes and loved the brother moments and the ending.
Thanks again for sharing your stories with us.
Until next time, take care.
| JazzyIrish chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
Finally got back to finish this great tale! As always, your wonderful prose and great storytelling skills were the perfect combination. I can't even imagine Sam's fear after being told his brother was dead and all of his light was gone; that his fate was to die in the dark alone. God!
A fabulous story. But I am so sad to read that it was based on a true tragedy of man being inhuman to man. How horrible. Loved your "The Miner's Prayer" at the end. It does take a special man to be able to work in a mine.
Thanks for sharing this story with us. Love your writing style and creative ideas! Until next time...
| JudyH chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Whoa...what a ride that was! You tapped into everyone's basic fears: of being trapped in a dark, claustrophobia inducing place, with little hope of rescue and a horrible death looming. The details were enthralling and the rescues took place not a moment too soon...Loved it!