Reviews for Earth Bender
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2016
Not bad for dipping into writing for a first better then what i could do though lol
JaliceJelsa4eva chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
This is cute
ScrambledUnicorn chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Aww so cute maybe he'll become a writer one day
dre20 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
That was cute! He'll be a really good writer as long as he practices! Tell him to keep it up!
Beatles4ever8 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
That's really good!
howls-spirited-lab rat chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Awww this is adorable! Tell your brother for me that if he works on it a little more it could be really good!
pearlgirl97 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
One thing I liked was that your brother didn't make himself as ridiculously overpowered as most young writers tend to do. Almost everything seemed possible (within the Avatar universe), which I find quite impressive. I suppose if I were offering actual constructive criticism, I'd say work on transitioning between events, and also on his descriptions, but altogether it's pretty fair for his age. Tell him I said good job and to keep at it.
Lolcano chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
pretty good story! Tell your brother to keep working hard on it, because I like it. :)
FlameoInstantNoodles chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
This is soooooooo cute. Tell your brother for me. I have a nine year old brother and I wish he would write fanfiction. But he doesn't so oh well. Tell him to keep writing. -F.I.N.