Reviews for Cold
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30
I loved it! Otp
SuperFanGirl chapter 1 . 4/19
This story is so sweet...But it needs a lot of work. I mean, I read this all the time buuuut...It juust needs a lot of work. BUT I LOOOOOVE YOUR STORIES!;D
jinx fangirl chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
You should of had more details about how kid touching jinx.
HihihahaMUAHAHAHA chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Awwwwwwwwww
So fluffy and good and sweet and i just can't stop reading it!
whimsicalQ chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Lol. I love this. :P
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I'm not saying the story is bad, but there is quite a lot that needs to be worked on. First is that the story is to jumpled together and is quite hard to read. This story lacks detail quite a lot of your others stories do as well. ,This story seems rushed also like quite a lot of your other stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Aww how could someone critique over this
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Awwww i never get tired of reading this
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
awww soo sweet and cute and everything
Gkyhdjr chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Hey gky here! Thanks so much for your reviews! Especially Gf! I rejoice that some one doesnt like it! That jut means I can learn from my mistakes and get better, so critique and hate on my friend. :) and also thanks for the other reviews :)
Gfcbb chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Awful story
patattack chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Cute.
Heather chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
Aww w how adorable, I love it! :D