Reviews for Just Because It Burns
Guest chapter 6 . 4/25/2014
You say review? I say please finish. Please? Pwetty pwetty please?
Chicacaliente chapter 6 . 4/19/2014
I need le part 2 because you ended with a cliffhanger... You need to update ASAP
IAmTheHero chapter 6 . 4/17/2014
Psssst! Update please? :)
AA121 chapter 6 . 4/11/2014
more more!
Lo chapter 6 . 4/11/2014
This isn't even fair. Please finish Love Part 2!
Crazyfan chapter 6 . 4/10/2014
Please more! And fast! I would love to see hook's reacsion.
NaturalMyth chapter 6 . 4/9/2014
When will you have the chance to update the second part... it just has to be finished... It can't just end like this... Please finish it soon... It is too good

I love your characterization of the characters; it aligns so perfectly with the story line in this alternate universe and it is such a realistic take that I could only hope that at least half of this will appear in the show. I especially love your subtle references to quotes from the show like the ones from 2x05/2x06. I can't wait until you finish this because I have literally been reading and rereading this for hours straight. Please finish it soon. This is exactly how I had imagined Captain Swan's relationship to be and your consistency with the characters' personalities are really on point with the show and constant throughout the whole story. Honestly, as soon as I finished this chapter, I kind of just sat there in both awe and disbelief because I just didn't know what to do with the rest of my life, since I found it hard to believe that I would have to go back to everyday life (also waiting for the next episode of once upon a time) after reading one of the best written fantasies that I have ever read. You are truly gifted with this talent.
NCISprobette chapter 6 . 4/8/2014
I kind of really hope that she's pregnant! And I'm really looking forward to her talking with Killian again because he's probably lost all hope now that Neal's back. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 6 . 4/8/2014
This is amazing... I couldn't stop reading and the characters fit in so perfectly with the ones in the show... Please finish it soon... It is just too good
Kris Morene chapter 6 . 4/4/2014
Loving this story! This is absolutely amazingly perfect Killian and Emma. I can't wait for the next update! -KM-
obina chapter 6 . 4/3/2014
excuse me... but the end? xD I wonder if she's pregnant or not, you can't have written all this story without an end! The love part is the most anticipated, please, post it! XD
LovingLCS chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I NEED THE END! lol but really, love your writing and expect great things from the ending )
G.M.Portraepic chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I've read it all in one go - it's taken up the better part of my Sunday, and so absolutely worth it! I just love it, please, PLEASE update again! Your characterisation, dialogue, context – it's all spot-on; perfect. Emma and Hook – their emotional development, literally took my breath away; a lot of what's said between them (particularly in this chapter) – it's the sort of confession that I hope will happen on Hook's part, at some stage in the show – so Emma really considers him, and his feelings. This has just been an absolute treat. You're incredibly talented, can't wait to read your other works. Thank you so much for sharing, and I do really hope you complete it! :)
LovingLCS chapter 6 . 3/27/2014
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post the next chapter!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/21/2014
Please, please, please finish this story! I'm dying to know how you plan to end it!
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