|Reviews for LustCraft II|
| Lunar678 chapter 17 . 8/26
You should do ones with either Deathwing or Varian
| Nogo'Zue chapter 17 . 7/9
Got a suggestion:
Did you knew that once there are no male harpies, they kidnap males from other species to their sexy-time?
And when the babies harpies are born, they eat the captured guy.
Forget this last part, could do somethin' with a troll and a harpy? Or a lot of harpies?
| Bobdogblue chapter 15 . 6/28
If I become a rapist when I'm older, I'll blame you. Anyway, PORN!
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/17
You will do a worgen sex scene even if I have strangle that goat-legged Dranei that keeps laying you until you do it! Besides, if what you really wanted to see was someone who had drawn a excellent sexy worgen, just head over to Deviantart and search sexy worgen.
P.S.- I still see you haven't done worgen sexy-scene and I am now in the process of strangling your Draenei bitch for mentioning that you haven't done so yet. She even had the gall to rub it in my face pal.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16
You should totally do a lemon-fic story for skyrim. Titled… The Lust scrolls…
Plz do it
| Gamer lover chapter 17 . 3/29
Need more. Please keep writing
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/10
You use the word would very weirdly I don't know if it means what you think it means, it feels like you're talking in the past tense.
| Talkaar chapter 17 . 12/7/2014
Really love what I've read so far, though there's a few that could use a bit more writing in general.
Think you could fit in some Tauren Males on Goblins or something like that? Or, maybe another smaller race.
Btw, my fav out of all your stories was the one with the Worgen Warlock and his Succubus.
I have no idea why I want to see that so badly...
| Austro-Hungarian Empire chapter 17 . 12/7/2014
Well, after reading nearly all of your lemons from both Lustcraft I and II, I can surely give an accurate opinion upon both. I, personally, give this story a 10 out of 10. Why? Because, I see no true flaws with it.
You used a large variety of vocab, I perceive nothing wrong with your grammar and the description is AMAZING. I always give FFs for putting as much detail and description as possible. I see no errors and the lore is spot on. The time and dedication put into this is astounding as well.
Well, I think I need not even begin with the lemons. Descriptive, spicy and passionate, if not rough and lustful as ever, I truly applaud these works, despite the "vile" activities and actions behind them. We all have our needs. If people cannot stomach that, then they can just go fuck themselves.
For an excellent and seemingly flawless writing, the mixture and accurateness of the lore, coupled with hot a steamy situations, as I have previously stated, I both the original and it's sequel a ten out of ten.
Plus, the author's are funny and now you cannot stop me from thinking about Jontron. Thusly, you force my hand to put forth this joke:
Me: "That Naga took out it's gentials, and two dicks came out."
Me: "Two can play at that game." *Takes out an Arakkoa which has four dicks.*
(Or, A.K.A., Jontron: That Frankenstein just flipped me the double bird, and then lazors came out.
Jontron: Two can play at that game. *Takes out Jacques and another parrot that shoots lasers out of it's eyes)
If your probably what I am high off of, it's life, good sir/ma'am. Speaking of which, I will guess that you are in fact of the female gender since you seem to focus on female stimulation and etc. In either case, I applaud these writings and proclaim they are a testament that smut (I sincerely apologize if you take offense to that term) can be written with the utmost quality and within a large number of quantity with a level of lasting impression.
Before I leave, I do have a few nick-picks and comments. Firstly, where is the Arakkoa? Not to say I'd like to see that, but I feel that little to no racers should be discluded and I feel the Arakkoa should have been at the fore-front. Not only that, but I feel somewhat disappointed with your choice of having the big lemon with Jaina be of Thrall and not of Arthas. I am a strong Arthas x Jaina fan, and I knew that having a writer of your caliber handel a passionate encounter like this, whether it be before or after he became a Death Knight/Lich King (Which, I would have prefered before, since it would have been more consenual). However, I did find the sex scene with Jaina and Thrall nice, and the sex scene with Syvalvanas and Arthas hilarious (Standing from the position now, Syvalanas found it...ironic). But, that is my personal tastes. I also like how you defend against having any beastiality and you stay away from it. Very rare when dabbling within these zones. In addition, how about a suggestion: Aedelas Blackmoore and Taretha Foxton.
I know this story is most likely on hiatus, but I felt it would have been right of me to put my thoughts forward and hopefully see the project worked on further. Good luck and best wishes on your others projects, you may be hearing from me again, perhaps sooner or perhaps later. Either way, excellent work, interested in your others story and that is all.
| Spartan of the Warsong clan chapter 8 . 12/2/2014
If you ask me the trolls are in the right. The night elves wiped out the Amani and Gurubashi for now reason.
Then the high elves came and built Silvermoon on top of a sacred troll city. Then they wiped out the Amani TWICE. So I think raping one elf pales in comparison to that.
Although this was an awesome chapter, still wish Hana went nuts again.
| OPHAXIMUS chapter 10 . 10/4/2014
more of dis please!
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/20/2014
Where's part 3?
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/15/2014
Wheres the next one i need more
| beast keeper 9 chapter 17 . 9/6/2014
do you plan on updating this story on farther just curious
| Blastoise chapter 17 . 8/28/2014