Reviews for LarryBoy: Good VS Evil
funstorytime127 chapter 1 . 8/23
Really like this story, excited to see how it ends!
firestare67 chapter 10 . 12/11/2016
1. is it doctor flurry?
2. I ship your night with bad apple
3. can you please have awful Alvin and greta von gruesome kiss
Bibtasmic chapter 4 . 4/26/2016
Satan-now you bible heroes will deal with me and all the forces of my imagination! Bible heroes-oh no! Bible villains laughing Delilah-imagination ha ha! Pharaoh -ha ha ha ! Goliath-ha ha ha
Bible heroes-Satan you may think you're so powerful but this is our dream!
Satan screaming-Ah no!
Bibtasmic chapter 3 . 4/26/2016
Satan-now I'll turn the bible heroes dream into a nightmare bibtasmic! Imagine this bible heroes ha ha ! Evil mirror on the wall all the forces of evil I call! It's time to say goodbye to the bible heroes enter the cave of flame fire! The bible heroes were screaming help!
Bibtasmic chapter 2 . 4/26/2016
Tonight join your favorite bible heroes and characters as they face evil forces that blast their way can the bible heroes save the day you're about to find out now we invite you to experience bibtasmic! The battle of good vs the forces of evilness
Bibtasmic chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
In this show the bible villains Delilah Pharaoh Goliath and Satan are invading the bible heroes dream but can the bible heroes face Satan? Find out in bibtasmic! The battle between good and the forces of evilness
danj chapter 9 . 12/4/2015
I have been a fan of Veggietales pretty much since I was born. You clearly have a good handle on your characters and their personalities. However I did notice one thing missing. Your story has become too much of an action drama and has lost the good natured humor which is prevalent in Veggietales. I'm not saying you need to shoehorn it, but you may want to lighten up just a bit. That said, you are still a great storyteller. Your plotline is believable (as much as Veggietales can be), your character development is relatable, and your dialogue keeps my interest. This story really shows a lot of promise and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Stad1um-Star chapter 9 . 8/8/2015
This is a really good VeggieTales story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2015
Larryboy said fib drop the asparagus
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
The Fib kept holding Junior Fib why are you doing this to me I thought I got rid of you by telling the truth now I'm gonna eat you Junior Hey fib you put Junior down Larryboy said
RainbowRose17 chapter 9 . 7/2/2015
Continue please, I'm really getting into this.
guest chapter 5 . 5/28/2015
where's the alchemist and his mother?
guest chapter 9 . 5/25/2015
this is getting good but you should have it were doc. flurry feels this has gone to far epically when Mr. taco fish plans to kill the hero's he has captured so he either decides to get Larry boy
or tries to free the hero's himself and is apprehended and branded a trader and also sent to he death penalty with the capture hero's is penguin friends(in my opinion)see this and run away to get Larry boy
or better yet (as you've said previsely) Mr. taco fish finds out about doc. flurry admires the incredible vegetables and thinks he needs a little push in the right direction and orders him to kill Larry boy when he comes to rescue the captured hero's
Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2015
Please add chapter 10
guest chapter 8 . 7/31/2014
continu
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