| Reviews for Abominations and Vampires |
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   Merchosias chapter 5 . 6/15/2014 OMFG Such a fabulous chapter I read it at 2 in the morning while my family was asleep in the living room and had to hold my laughs in, it was very difficult Dude I may have written and typed more than you but your a fantastic writer and better than me already I would love to continue reading this and I have been waiting for this chapter for quite some time Trust me I know all about Writer's Block Keep up the good work and Ill miss you at school next year P.S Don't forget to message me on facebook sometime or at least Skype me Your Best Buddy Blake ATV145 |
| TopTop chapter 4 . 1/6/2014 please keep writing that was awesome story and I think you should continue it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2013 Very enjoyable, good job not trivializing Tsukune and keeping everyone's power levels in check. Keep it up! |
| te.nellis chapter 4 . 10/22/2013 Lol oh gosh that was a hilarious chapter |
| Merchosias chapter 4 . 10/22/2013 Hilarious, I absolutely WUV IT! I still think there could be some lime at least, yes lime would be perfect rught now. I have the lemon and you can provide the lime so we can have ourselves some Sprite! I hope you continue this story, I am dying to see some shimuru. Or some Rubume, or maybe some mokano! See you at school :D |
| Alan Rickman chapter 3 . 10/4/2013 did you die mate? |
| imadeadude chapter 3 . 9/7/2013 please up date soon O.O |
| Merchosias chapter 3 . 8/21/2013 Make Ume try to kiss one of the two girls or try to kiss tsukune like yukari was with tsukune at first then she kind of started liking him but she is still gay but she thought she give it a try I want to see some parts :D Your friend at school ATV145 |
| Merchosias chapter 2 . 8/21/2013 I like the ShimaXKurumu Pairing they fit each other I love the story and watch your typing for small and minor mistakes and mispellings Continue on my friend |
| te.nellis chapter 3 . 8/9/2013 Another funny chapter produce more! Lol |
| te.nellis chapter 2 . 8/9/2013 That was another good chapter. I like how you paired the blind man with the overly beautiful girl lolololololol |
| te.nellis chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 That was a good chapter I like how the story is fluent and the OCs do not replace anyone but full their own supporting role. Those roles could be a little smaller so Tsukune has a bigger role but other than that I have no complaints keep it up! |
| XxSpec77xX chapter 3 . 8/7/2013 More shima |
| DoomKnight1of24 chapter 2 . 7/27/2013 That was, surprisingly, actually rather enjoyable. I've briefly read some other OC-stories here on the RV-section, and they tend to cross over in Mary Sue-territory pretty quickly... so I'm happy to see that you managed to avoid that! Seriously, well done. I think the reason that you managed to pull that off so nicely is, while you did expose these OCs a lot in your story so far, you never -over-exposed them. You let them keep some secrets, like what sort of monster Shima is, and you managed to make them interesting and with distinct personalities. While not going over the top (although you did skirt the line making Takeshi the Jack of All Trades that he is, but that's neither here nor there. Besides, as far as I know, you might have some sort of awesome backstory lying in wait for that somewhere). That said, I think this story is definitely worth supporting! Looking forward to your next update, 'cause if there is a major problem with this story here, it's that there isn't more of it. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2013 This story seems pretty good and your oc's seem to be well developed charectors who are not perfect who can do anything likes most, so nice work, |