this story makes no sense Naruto after war with the juubi should not be this weak

Loved the omake. I was just playing the EXACT game (Borderlands Pre-sequel) this morning.

There was promise in the summary and general plot. So far the execution of said plot has been atrocious. He’s acting like the Pre-Shippuden Naruto. Completely clueless and annoyingly naive to the point where he gets distracted in the middle of a fight. Wanted to give this story a shot but I’m dropping this here, seeing that it’s abandoned and the way it’s going so far I know I’m not going to be missing much.

Ok so little note to start i know this story hasn't been updated in years but hope you still read this. Ok to start with about the summoning jutsu, to start with the summoning realms are already in a different dimension and the summoning jutsu is the most common form of a space time jutsu like the kamui of obito it travels through dimension to connect two different spaces at the same or different times. Basically what I'm saying is that no matter what dimension some with a summoning contract is in they would still have the ability to summon hell even on the other side of the universe wouldn't matter as it is like opening a door anywhere to the same room.

What nonsense, to let such an enemy live just after giving him some vital information about himself and his own power, talk about stupidity and incompetence. If this doesn't come back to bite Naruto in the ass later I'll change my name...
Anyway, I think I'll drop it here, too silly

Man, I hate this kind of thing in fics. The succubus was literally trying to turn him into a slave, brainwashing him, and how did Naruto react? Nothing, haha laughs and jokes, nothing serious
Well, I've seen that it's probably going to be a common power masturbation and weird harem story

hope this story comes back soon I was enjoying it immensely before the author stopped updating

I had been really enjoying the story, but to be honest, my interest took a sharp nosedive when you brought Tsukune in. My interest was then completely killed off when you double-downed on his inclusion in your author’s note as well as confirmed the Tsukune/Kurumu pairing. It’s a shame because a big reason I had been enjoying your story was due to Tsukune not being in the picture.

Ah well, none of what I’m saying matters in the end. The loss of a reader won’t mean anything to you as you have your own vision of what you want this story to be, or at least you did. Not sure if this still applies seeing as you haven’t updated this story in a while, but I won’t reading anymore of this story from here to confirm it anyway.

Good luck, good health, and you do you.

I really hate stories where everyone thinks it's 'more unique' to steer away from 'main characters' to minor characters that readers know little about, because the fact you KNOW SO LITTLE about the characters makes authors end up portraying them in a way that is totally out of character and YES, Mizore is a 'minor character', there is less on her and Yukari than there is on Kurumu (whom is always left out of these crossovers).

Secondly it's not 'hip' or 'original' to focus on Tsundere's and Emos, ESPECIALLY with Naruto. Hell, I'm not even really a NaruHina fan because Hinata's character simply doesn't mesh with Naruto, she's just submissive. Honestly her 'homely housewife' appearance in Boruto is practically how I viewed the pairing from the start, however even Hinata has more to mesh with Naruto than Mizore, PLUS Hinata's character is 'pliable', an 'Emo' will ALWAYS be an 'Emo', but a 'Shy Girl' can 'snap' and either turn into the feistiest bitch you've ever seen or a total slut, but still I think Naruto meshes better with girls that share his personality traits, in the Naruto series, that'd be Sakura, in DxD it'd be Akeno or Rias, and in this series it'd be Kurumu or Moka.

I can see Mizore in a HAREM setting, but as the main girl... no. So I don't even know why such a stupid challenge was made and honestly, this is why I hate them. Aside from the fact most 'Challengers' have never wrote shit themselves, their challenges often make no damn sense and come from some bat-shit crazy fantasy or fetish they have. Honestly Fanfic should have 'Purged' Challengers along with M-Preg authors instead of Lemon writers, song-fic writers, and poem writers.

Looking forward to Chapter 31.

Are you fucking stupid or something Naruto wouldn't have any issues blitzing wolf boy for one Naruto has MFTL speed feats while also being a planera

While I really want to like this the powerlevel is just too nerfed to continue T-T

thets cause these low levels were never the point, its the actual poeple and real life focus. You lost realism in the mix. Not all problems are an enemie

u cant explain the main characters power later the way u are, theres not enough juice. some people dont care that much

naruto can destory every cells in alucard body with rasenshuriken like he did with kakuzu