Reviews for Copper and Wine
LiwNa chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
ASDFGHJKL I'm dying ! Lauren you're so amazing it hurts !
HotCopFan chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
Oh, that was so much better than anything I'd imagined happening to Crowe. Good work!
alwaysxxx chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I'm blown away! Cannot wait to read on!
moralkiosk chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
birdharp chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
"I remove my knife from my pocket and flip it open and drag it along side the 76' Camaro parked inside. Pity." - Oh, my god. I love this Maura.

Okay. You've got me reading (and obviously enjoying) this story. Congratulations. :P

No idea how it can end well for anyone. But maybe it won't. Will I continue to read anyway? Yes. Yes I will.
birdharp chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
Holy... mother... of fucking... shit.

*closes eyes with image in head*
*re-reads last few paragraphs*
*curses again*
*clicks to next chapter*
birdharp chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Ugh. Love Maura's thoughts when she is staring out the window: "She is a light in the corner of something dark inside of me... I wish I knew how to place what she does. How she does it. I want to put it neatly in a box and compartmentalize it. Her." The thoughts of every single person ever when falling in love with someone.

"I try not to think of what it would feel like to move inside of her that deeply." ohmygodi'mdead.
Jac Lag chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Omg what happened to Maura and what will happen to her in the end? I really hope the crows eat up everything coz I'm worried that people will find out the stitch and what did she do to his removed organ? I don't know how Jane will react if she finds out Maura is not what she seems. I hope she really protects her.. this is not gonna end happy right?
Evangelion10119 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
This chapter was so great - I loved the juxtaposition of the first portion's tenderness and the violence of the last. (Though I have to admit to skipping over some of the gore, as I'm a bit of a wimp.) Maura's characterization ties in seamlessly with this darker side, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!
Sharbi chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Well done.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Whoa! this fic is pretty dark. I love it. your maura is one sick psychopath but only to those deserving pricks like Crowe and Fairfield. but can jane handle it.
mrj726 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Kerry chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
This is fantastic! You have a brilliant imagination and while i didn't expect the canon sweet-and-caring-and-unable-to-even-LIE Maura to not work at all as dark, murderous SERIAL KILLER MAURA, it totally does! And often when i read R&I fanfics which has them intimately involved i don't warm to it because the characters in the show just aren't like that, not really (at least to me! but i am willing to see how others may interpret that!) but because you have changed Maura in these ways (dark ways), it seems wholly feasible that she would like LIKE Jane because while she is still Maura, she is the Maura we know... but with a WHOLE other life going on underneath, and who's to say that wanting Jane is not a part of that(?!), and i absolutely love that i am able to like them together like that! So well done! I also ABSOLUTELY LOVE the way you use canon scenes as the exterior of Maura, for when she goes about her everyday life, layering over the dark ones you have created! Makes it so BELIEVABLE and gives us that extra capacity to imagine Maura really doing this! Sorry for the Epic here, but i just am in awe of your writing! Mwaha! Update PLEASE! D
Kungfufighter chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Brilliant! This story is so well written; I can't compliment your skills enough. I like how you weave canon into your story. Looking forward to each update! Your Maura is such an interesting and complex character. I am looking forward to learning more about the motivation behind her murderous ways (the dream about her parents offered a heartbreaking and gruesome glimpse). I am also curious how Maura will be able to keep Jane from discovering her dark secrets.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
I love it so much. But I don't quite like that Maura kills people who can so easily be traced back to her... I know it's for Rizzles sake and everything but that's not what Hannibal would do... but other than that it's absolutely brilliant and amazingly written.
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