Reviews for Britain on the Beach
little sopheria chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
If I have loved the way you portrait England in "I love you with every shattered piece", I really can't explain how much I have loved him in this fic! He is so in character and, let me say it, I really can picture him complaints over everything like you make him do! That was really hilarious! And, America... Do I have to express myself over him too? Because I can't, really, not because I would not spend a word for him too, but because I don't have words that could explain how much I have loved him, overexcited to spent time with Arthur, at the beach, making sandcastle and all. Last but not least, the sexy scene... Oh dear Lord... I really LOVE and appreciate your writings. You're a very skilful writer and I mean it! So, thanks for the story and keep going!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
I love this omg you are such an amazing writer!
You should do a sequel at englands place that would be so amazing!
Anyways keep up the good work!

-Ally
xLittleFoolx chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I feel pretty much the same about the beach as Iggy. Like, it's real pretty and all, but actually being there isn't so fun.
Lunar Iris chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
This was pretty hot, and funny...in the right places. I can see England reacting in those ways.

One little thing that I didn't like quite so much, it's just a nit-picky thing really, was putting the moans, groans and gasps in parenthesis.
UsUkRevolutionaryLove chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
That was one smexy lemon / great job!
Ethelwyn chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Hahaha, finally I got to read this. And damn, why did I have to wait so long for getting to it? Well, stupid RL.
This was cute and hot and sexy. I like needy England a lot. And I like him teasing America even more. Go Arthur! Make that colony of yours work for it! XDDD
The beach scenes were a lot of fun. It totally fits that England would hate the sun XD The little grumpy cat was complaining a lot, but once he realized he was at the beach with his love found it in his heart to not be so obstinate and finally enjoyed it, if only for the other's presence. I still don't get the monkey, though o_O I think this screams of a continuation though. "America in the rain" ;DDDDD I can totally see him in his flip flops, shorts and shirt (while everyone else is wearing long pants and trenchcoats because it's COLD) and replay the "Singing in the Rain" main scene ;D
This was a lot of fun and sexy, so thanks for sharing, Sweety.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Wow the smut was just 3
DaringEMAE chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
*.* that was great!
Arukea chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
This made my day better! I love it /
AwesomenessHero chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
This was so cute and hot. :)
Really these two never seizes to amaze me and make my day! Thank you for this awesome fic! :)
vulpixfairy chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
That was a very well written sweetness between Alfred and Arthur :) Thank you for making my day :)