Reviews for Betrayal
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20
I just want you to know that many of your stories have had me in literal tears of laughter - or pain. This is just one of many. Thank you so much for writing! :)
Alanna official chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
There is something seriously wrong with your mind. How the hell did you come up with someone talking to their baby like that.
Con Dar Lioness chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Haha, this was so funny. I really like it :)
Danaye chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Huh. (This is me expressing my befuddlement.) I've never even considered this aspect of the Alanna/Buri relationship. In fact, I've never really even considered their relationship at all (which is explanation for my befuddlement). I like Buri and I like Alanna so why I didn't put two and two together...well anyway, it's a rather unexplored character dynamic and I really like that you delved into it. I really liked reading this. It fit the characters really perfectly. If anyone would curse at their baby lovingly, it would be Alanna. Well done!