|Reviews for the girl invader|
| Ha ha I'm so alone chapter 1 . 10/16
Hey dude! sorry this review doesn't relate to the story, I just wanted to say that the "Gwindoo" reviewer means nothing; he has commented the exact same on my story too, and, I believe, 45 others; If anyone is reading this, please report the offensive review. I know two people on my story have, but it still hasn't been taken down and I don't want the same for your story. This guy doesn't deserve to be on the site! (again, sorry it doesn't relate to your fic which I'm sure is wonderful xx)
| Ella Le Hissy chapter 3 . 10/13
Oh thank god! I'm glad your continuing this story. :)
| Gwindoo chapter 1 . 10/12
Dear Shithead Who Wrote This,
What the fuck is this shit... this isn't even a story (or song, like I said, I don't know what the fuck this is?)? YOU WROTE TOXIC WASTE. BAD. BAD. BAD. What the fuck is wrong with you putting shit like this on the internet?! You need to take this PIECE OF SHIT off of this website. A crackhead can even write a better story than this garbage, even A DOG could.
This website ain't for 6 year olds (I know what you are with spelling like that) sons of bitches or mentally handicapped motherfuckers like you that stay at home and draw welfare and food stamps, stay high off of drugs and pain medications, stay drunk all of the time, spend all of their paycheck (RUNNING BACK AND FORTH TO THE LIQUOR STORE AND TOBACCO SHED ALL DAY, AND SPREAD CANCER) on beer (CARBONATED GASOLINE) whiskey (MOONSHINE) gin (ALL ALCOHOLIC -ETHANOL- DRINKS ARE DOING NOTHING BUT KILLING YOU DUMBASS WEAK MOTHERFUCKERS AND YOUR WATERED DOWN BRAIN CELLS AND FUCKED UP DNA, JUST BECAUSE YOU CAN'T GET ANY PUSSY OR A BITCH'S PIEHOLE TO STICK YOUR PISSSTICK UP/DOWN OR GET A DICK UP YOUR FUCKHOLE, YOU DRINK YOURSELF TO DEATH) cigars ("Black n' Mild"- SO YOU CAN HAVE LUNGS LIKE MOLTEN TIRES AND COUGH UP THAT POISONOUS SHIT AND SPREAD IT OVER ALL OVER OTHER PEOPLE WHO AREN'T A WEAK MOTHERFUCKER LIKE YOU AND GIVE THEM GENETIC ABNORMALITIES - a.k.a CANCER/MUTATIONS - LOOK WHAT YOU STUPID SELFISH MOTHERFUCKERS HAVE DONE TO ME!) cigarettes (cancer sticks- STILL SPREADING THAT POISONOUS MUTAGENIC SHIT ALL OVER THE FUCKING PLACE- FUCKING UP THE HUMAN RACE - WHICH IS ALREADY FUCKED UP TO THE POINT OF NO FUCKING RETURN THANKS TO IGNORANT FUCKBAGS LIKE YOURSELF - AND FUTURE GENERATIONS EVEN MORE, BUT LESS) dip "snuff" (first mutagenic substance discovered - Candied Shit - BROWN LIKE SHIT AND EVERYTHING ELSE ABOUT SHIT, STILL SPITTING OUT MUTAGENS THAT ALTER NORMAL PEOPLES' DNA) chew-tobacco (so you and your SHITTY breath can smell like the SHITTIEST PIECE OF SHIT IN THE UNIVERSE, and have TEETH THAT LOOK LIKE YOU EAT SHIT EVERYDAY FOR BREAKFAST) etc, wear shitty ass raggedy clothes that look like they pulled them out of a trashcan, smoke weed and crack, go from house being a man/woman whore (THINKING ABOUT SEX EVERY 10 FUCKING SECONDS -and food- LIKE A DAMN WILD ASS ANIMAL), have no life, get banged up by sorry ass men/women (mostly drug addicts) and shoot out babies nonstop (for women)/get every woman in sight pregnant like a damn animal (for men), have a thousand little child support babies, and live off of other people and the system their entire fucking life.
You should burn your computer (OR BURN YOURSELF FOR ALL I CARE) after you wrote this or smash open your damn head (WATER BALLOON FUCKING AIRHEAD) with it and maybe knock some sense into it (OR BUST OPEN YOUR FUCKING SKULL). This crap shouldn't be on this site, take it to deviantART (A CLOSETED PORN WEBSITE) or 4chan (A WEBSITE FOR INBRED BASTARDS WITH EVERY MENTAL ILLNESS IMAGINABLE) or fac(K)ebook (faggotbook- WHERE WHORES LIKE YOU GO TO GET ATTENTION FROM IDIOTS AND SLUTS -who secretly cut themselves and are addicted to drugs- WITH NO REAL LIFE THAT YOU CALL YOUR FRIENDS, AND SEX MANIACS GO BEAT OFF THEIR COCK TO PICTURES OF BITCHES AND SLUTS THEY DON'T EVEN KNOW) or twitter (twinkter- WHERE MORE WHORES LIKE YOURSELF GO TO GET ATTENTION BECAUSE NO ONE LOVES YOU) or some gay ass shit like that, black ass greasy tire looking nigger, Nigerian (Niggerian)/Indian scammer poor worthless trash that deserves to be thrown away, weak useless parasitic trash with PTSD ("SEXUAL ASSAULT", CHILD "ABUSE", "DISASTERS", OR WHATEVER THE FUCK IS SO "TRAUMATIZING" -that makes you run to a fucking therapist/"counselor"/psychologist/psychiatrist/"shrink" who only wants every cent in your pocket so that they can run around and have fun spreading rumors about whatever fucked up thing you told them-, ARE NOT DISEASES), white ass snowball, blackie nigger (PROJECT NIGGA WITH HIV/AIDS AND TOO MANY STDs TO COUNT), faggot ass cocksucking fuck, nasty ass alcoholic slob, CRAZY UGLY ASS SCHIZOPHRENIC RETARDED HAGGARD BITCH, redneck (WHITE TRAILER TRASH WITH A DEFORMED FUCKED UP HEAD) piece of shit, bald headed Steve Wilkos/Steve Harvey looking gay ass whiny fuck, retarded Indian/Chinese/Asian (STOP STEALING FUCKING JOBS AND GET YOUR OWN IN YOUR SHITTY COUNTRY) dirtnigger/yerrowwivernigger with a false sense of self-inflated worth (JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE A "DOCTOR" DOESN'T MEAN SHIT;YOU NOTHING BUT TRASHY PANSEXUAL SCUM THAT IS OBSESSED WITH TOUCHING NAKED PEOPLE AND STEALING ALL OF THEIR MONEY - YOU MOTHERFUCKERS ARE WORSE THAN PEDOPHILES), bald headed white annoying racist skinhead motherfucker, skinny gay poor homeless slave looking manwhore with AIDS (I bet you're ready to fight now, little ass skin and bones bitch) that has a plastic anus because it needed reconstructive surgery after all those AIDS-infected dicks got shoved into it, fatass Big Mac lover, cum-thirsty, short fat Mexican wetback fucker with 50 "children", worthless tramp with a shitty ass job that makes $3 an hour (might as well be a prostitute because you suck your coworkers/boss (if you are a college/high school/whatever student, your suck your teachers) dicks/titties and lick their pussies on a DAILY BASIS), facebook twitter attention whore fuck, dejected emo bitch/bastard (GO CUT YOURSELF), dumb blonde slut, sack of shit fuck, shitty HUMAN TRASH, fucked fucker fuck, "asexual" fag (YOUR'E BETTER OFF NOT EXISTING BECAUSE YOU DI NOTHING BUT WASTE RESOURCES AND DON'T PRODUCE SHIT) that can't get knocked up, cock hungry cock addict, ching chin chin chong chang choo choo bitch fucker, FAT UGLY WHITE NIGGER LOVING BISEXUAL BITCH THAT WHINES AND CRIES ABOUT EVERYTHING, cowardly abused cock whore trying to be cute (I HATE fuckers who try and act cute), gay husky bear rainbow faggot booty lover (Why do you like ass/pussy?), titty/pussy/dick eater, pathetic worthless parasitic nasty atrocious human, dirty panty sniffing nasty fucker (USE THOSE SAME SHITTY AND PISSY PANTIES TO TIE TO YOUR INSIDES AND RIP THEM OUT OF YOUR MOUTH - IF YOU LIKE SMELLING/EATING PISS/SHIT/ASS/PUSSY, YOU BELONG IN THE FUCKING ZOO -or an research laboratory for new species- ANYWAY BECAUSE YOU'RE SOME KIND OF NASTY ASS HYBRID CREATURE) fucked up ugly fucker, motherfucking hoe. I'm gonna report this shit just for being retarded as fuck. Yeah I cussed yo dumbass out, PM me. I DARE you, you whiny ass bitch ugly piece of shit. UGLY FATASS BITCH, LOOKING LIKE A UGLY ASS MAN. YOU REALLY NEED HELP. HHHHAAAHHHHAAAHHHHAAHHH!
*PS 1* Stay the FUCK off of drugs, it's for your own safety.
*PS 2* DON'T WRITE ANYMORE SHITFICS LIKE THIS ANY DAMN MORE BECAUSE NO ONE WANTS TO HEAR/CARE ABOUT YOUR SHITTY ASS WORTHLESS PERSONAL LIFE.
*PS 3* STOP SPREADING MUTATIONS, YOU IGNORANT FUCK. I BET YOUR HAIR IS GREY (IF YOU EVEN STILL HAVE ANY) AS FUCKKKK! o_o
*PS 4* TAKE THIS ILLEGAL BULLSHIT PROPAGANDA DOWN.
*PS 5* O.0...oooooooo... BY THE WAY, YOUR PROFILE PIC AND STORY PIC IS ... FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCKKKKKKKEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDD UUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPP... SO YOU MIGHT WANT TO BURN/DESTROY THAT UGLY MOTHERFUCKER BEFORE YOU ARE SENT TO PRISON FOR ATTEMPTING MURDER (OR ACTUALLY KILLING SOMEONE) OR FOR A CRIME AGAINST HUMANITY.
*PS 6* BUT SERIOUSLY, DELETE THAT FUCKER BEFORE IT IS DECLARED A WEAPON OF MASS DESTRUCTION (IT ALREADY IS ONE IN MY BOOK - THIS FUGLY SON OF A BITCH CAN KILL SOMEONE) AND YOU GET DEEP IN SOME SERIOUS SHIT.
*PS 7* GO SUCK/CHOKE ON A PAIR OF BALLS OR A DICK OR A PAIR OF TITTIES. Here's a better suggestion... BURN AND CUT AND FUCK THE HELL OUT OF YOURSELF UNTIL THAT LITTLE FLESHBAG YOU CALL "SKIN" FALLS OFF.
*PS 8* *CENSORED* (IS SOMETHING SO HORRIBLE THAT IT CAN'T BE PUT IN WORDS)
*PS 9* GO BACK HOME... TO THE FUCKING ZOO. DO I HAVE TO CALL ANIMAL CONTROL? DON'T MAKE ME...
*PS 10* YOU'RE PROBABLY NEARING BLIND OR/AND DEAF. THE SHIT THAT YOU PUT IN YOUR FUCKING SYSTEM EVERYDAY IS KILLING THE FUCKING HELL OUT OF YOUR STUPID ASS AND YOU'RE TOO FUCKING DUMB TO REALIZE IT. IN A COUPLE OF YEARS OR EVEN MONTHS ALL OF YOUR DAMN HAIR WILL HAVE FALLEN OUT OF YOUR FUCKING FUCKED UP HEAD FROM CANCER. YOU WILL THINK ABOUT WHAT I TOLD YOUR IGNORANT ASS AND FEEL SORRY. WAKE THE FUCK UP BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!
*PS 11* STOP STICKING YOUR HANDS IN RANDOM BITCHES' PUSSIES AND USE THEM TO WRITE A REAL STORY, NOT SHIT LIKE THIS.
*PS 12* CLEAN YOUR NASTY ASS STINKY STICKY/SLIPPERY HANDS AND USE THEM FOR SOMETHING ELSE BESIDES RUBBING DOWN PUSSY WITH LUBE/CUM OR FOOD/RANDOM SHIT (ICING, WHIPPED CREAM, CHOCOLATE, HONEY, MOTOR OIL, CRACK, WEED, BEER, WHISKEY, BEER BOTTLES, CIGARETTES, CIGARS, "SNUFF", BATH SALTS, MEAT, VEGETABLES, FRUITS, I DON'T FUCKING KNOW WHAT YOU DIRTY PERVERTED MOTHERFUCKERS PUT ON/IN PUSSIES/DICKS- AND BE A NASTY SON OF A BITCH TO EAT IT OUT WITH CUM/BLOOD/BODY FLUIDS/DNA ON IT).
*PS 13* GO BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF YOUR "MATE"/GIRLFRIEND/WIFE/BOYFRIEND/FIANCÉ/HUSBAND (IF YOU HAVE ONE/SOME YOU SLIMY SLUTBAG) AND YOUR KIDS UNTIL YOU KNOCK THEM OUT AND GO SMASH YOUR HEAD INTO A WALL UNTIL IT EXPLODES- YOU CRAZY ASS MOTHERFUCKER!
Fuck off, manwhore/faggot booty lover/bitch/nigger/doctor/human/it/dog/redneck/cracker/cholo/chin/tomato/human trash/whatever the fuck you are
You Were Asking For It.
| zap me please chapter 1 . 9/16
Please continue the wait is killling me!
| Invader Ash chapter 1 . 8/1
| DoomGirl chapter 1 . 8/1
Well... this can't end well.
| Senpai.Kush chapter 1 . 8/3
Well that was interesting!
Now That's What I'd Like To Call An Excellent Fanfic! Sorry For Spam, But My Stories Are Hilarious/Interesting. DO NOT GO TO MY PROFILE! AND DON'T LEAVE A COMMENT! Adios! ;)
| Ella Le Hissy chapter 1 . 8/1
For some reason I feel if Zim where female he would be voiced by Shelby Rabara. You know the lady that voices Peridot.
| Weesnawthedemonslayer chapter 1 . 7/30
Great first chapter I never even really thought about an invader zim gender bender. (Ships sailing). I also had a request (ik its early but maybe) Tak could come in to believing zim was a girl too. Whole world of possibilities there, but I anticipate where this will lead to
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/5
No it's a good title
| Period blood chapter 4 . 4/17
Hey if zim got some of the earth females DNA wouldn't that mean aside from having a breast he could get puberty the female human way just to give an idea of the females DNA if your also female the ones who got thier period on summer are lucky for not having thier period humiliation infront of the class please make zim have puberty the human female way I'll follow you I'll do anything for that to happe! :D
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/10
Ugh you put Dibs name lowere case alea
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/10
How big zims breast because i hope its not the size od andrewsons hand
| Commander Liv chapter 9 . 3/19
Don't pause it , it's awesome and I love Female Zim x Dib.
| Anonomous chapter 10 . 2/9
You need to continue please!