Reviews for Enemies With Benefits
reallyseaweed chapter 9 . 8/7/2018
Super liked this chapter
reallyseaweed chapter 10 . 8/7/2018
I hope they admitted their own feeling
reallyseaweed chapter 11 . 8/7/2018
Oh malfoy
reallyseaweed chapter 12 . 8/7/2018
It's so hot
reallyseaweed chapter 13 . 8/7/2018
I liked their attraction toward another
reallyseaweed chapter 14 . 8/7/2018
I hope Malfoy stopped thinking about stupid thoughts he had
reallyseaweed chapter 15 . 8/7/2018
Ton is such a 2 year old kid.
reallyseaweed chapter 16 . 8/7/2018
I finished it and I really liked it
Bionically chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
Hey! Great job! I was intrigued by the summary, despite the pwp warning, and found that it wasn't just smut. I thought you did a fairly tasteful job with the smut, and you did well in transitioning from just sex to something more. By that I mean that the sex itself got more involved rather than drunken encounters. In the last few chapters though, I have to say I started to skim through.

What I really enjoyed was the relationship development in your story, and this was a better one than some others out there. It was interesting how your Draco didn't start out redeemed and still held onto his pureblood beliefs. The reasoning behind that was well-crafted. I especially liked your Hermione and her taking Draco less than seriously, although she seemed slightly more happy-go-lucky than normal for someone whose childhood sweetheart knocked up someone else. She was pretty vindictive in the books so I was surprised Ron skated by so easily. He really should have gotten some hexes to his balls, at the very least. Your Draco, however, really took the cake. You did wonderfully in his falling for Hermione, in his overall moroseness and behavior.

What I thought could be improved, and don't get me wrong-I really enjoyed this-was that I thought the ending could have been developed a little more. There seemed to be a really sudden shift from Draco not knowing what to do to suddenly being okay with everything out in the open and suddenly standing up to his mother. But it was sufficiently well done that I don't think affects the story as a whole. Just, maybe, if you were looking to write a plot-ridden piece in the future.

Thanks for writing!
christymg chapter 16 . 7/28/2018
Loved this story light and fun!
Jazzielady76 chapter 16 . 7/17/2018
This was beautiful! Will be bookmarked and enjoyed for rereads later!
jennydcg chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
Just read this story and I loved it
wounded warrior chapter 10 . 7/5/2018
i love this fic
Ivalolo chapter 16 . 6/9/2018
Great story!
LaBelladoneX chapter 16 . 6/8/2018
That was fun! Man, I hate Ron! BTW, I'm Irish, you're forgiven x
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