Reviews for Enemies With Benefits |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Super liked this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope they admitted their own feeling |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh malfoy |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so hot |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked their attraction toward another |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Malfoy stopped thinking about stupid thoughts he had |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ton is such a 2 year old kid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finished it and I really liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Great job! I was intrigued by the summary, despite the pwp warning, and found that it wasn't just smut. I thought you did a fairly tasteful job with the smut, and you did well in transitioning from just sex to something more. By that I mean that the sex itself got more involved rather than drunken encounters. In the last few chapters though, I have to say I started to skim through. What I really enjoyed was the relationship development in your story, and this was a better one than some others out there. It was interesting how your Draco didn't start out redeemed and still held onto his pureblood beliefs. The reasoning behind that was well-crafted. I especially liked your Hermione and her taking Draco less than seriously, although she seemed slightly more happy-go-lucky than normal for someone whose childhood sweetheart knocked up someone else. She was pretty vindictive in the books so I was surprised Ron skated by so easily. He really should have gotten some hexes to his balls, at the very least. Your Draco, however, really took the cake. You did wonderfully in his falling for Hermione, in his overall moroseness and behavior. What I thought could be improved, and don't get me wrong-I really enjoyed this-was that I thought the ending could have been developed a little more. There seemed to be a really sudden shift from Draco not knowing what to do to suddenly being okay with everything out in the open and suddenly standing up to his mother. But it was sufficiently well done that I don't think affects the story as a whole. Just, maybe, if you were looking to write a plot-ridden piece in the future. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story light and fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful! Will be bookmarked and enjoyed for rereads later! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read this story and I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fun! Man, I hate Ron! BTW, I'm Irish, you're forgiven x |